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The light and shadows are good. I would've liked to see some people walking towards the camera and cropping on the top is too tight, you have cut the head of the nearest walker.

Would it be possible to see the picture at least 400x600? But anyway I'd give 6/6. I don't see much to improve. Good work.

Going through critique forum, this was one of the few pictures that made me stop. I went through your portfolio and I'd suggest to try some really basic "by the book" portraits. Pay attention to the light, composition, background and depth of field, make the person you photograph feel comfortable and that's it. After seeing this portrait of yours I'm looking forward to see more. All the best.

Americans seem to be very enthusiastic photographing their flag. Every week there's at least one of these. But I have to admit, this is one of the best ones.

Well composed.

It'd be interesting to see the original picture, without Photoshop.

Good work! Compliments. One of the few photographs in which I see understanding of light. Reminds me somehow the work of Trent Parke. Keep on going.

Buy a good lens, f:2,8 or even better, maybe f:1,4. Never use direct flash. Pay attention at the available light. Have a look at the work of the old masters of portrait photography. A glance for the best photographers of our days might be useful too. I hope this helps a step further.

Very good calm portrait, but yes, I'd make it a bit darker to see skin details also in the hand.

This would be a great peace of work without the paint all over and I would take care also of the skin tones; in some spots its slightly overexposed. The only thing that really disturbs me, is that her nose is a bit too much out of focus, the rest out of focus is really good. altough in some parts it looks, not so well Photoshopped.

You Like Ralph Gipson too?! You're not alone. A good picture. Just that I'd like to see some details on the paper.

What is this? What do you want to say with it? sorry, I don't get the point.

Ben visto, la composizione 蠯ttima. Avrei voluto vedere tutta la foto messa a fuoco, ma ovviamente dipende dall'obiettivo se era possibile o no.

Fatta bene questa foto, ma sono d'accordo con la prima critica, che quella striscia grigia a destra disturba un p�.

Ancora salve. Ho guardato il tuo portfolio 蠤evo dire che ci sono veramente tante foto che voterei 6 o 7. Sei sicuramente molto meglio di me come fotografo, ma non si pu� vincere sempre. In bocca al lupo!

Salve Gino. Hai chiesto perch頮on ho dato dei voti cos젡lti come tutti gli altri. Ci sono alcuni motivi: fotograficamente la foto non 蠮iente di particolare, s쬠messa a fuoco 蠧iusto, colori sono naturali, ma l'unica cosa interessante 蠬ui. Se guardi i ritratti che prendono sempre i voti pi� alti, sono esattamente cos쬠un vecchietto con la barba e le rughe, ancora meglio se hanno una sigaretta in bocca, o un biscottino come in questa qui. In generale queste foto mi annoiano. In questo sito secondo me poche sanno molto della fotografia. Ci sono pure dei fotografi veramente bravissimi, non lo posso negare, ma maggioranza... Altre foto, che spesso, se lo posso dire, fanno cagare, sono le nude. Basta che c'蠵na ragazza carina che fa vedere un p� di pi� pelle e bam, prendono sempre minimo 5 o 6. Non importa quant'蠦atta male la foto.

Per me le cose pi� importanti sono la composizione e l'uso della luce. Alla fine, fotografia vuol dire: disegnare con la luce. E in questa foto non lo vedo. Spero di aver dato la risposta alla domanda? Good luck and enjoy photography!

I think the picture is a bit out of balance. I think the singer should be more on the right side, she is in focus anyway, so there is no need her being in the middle. It would also be better to leave more "air" on the left side, the bass player seems almost to fall out of the picture. As the last point: it would be nice to see the both hands of the bass player.

I'd pay attention to the composition. General rule is Not to cut body parts, in this case the hand.

I would like to see his hand. Hands tell often as much of lived life as the face.

Thanks for looking

Thanks for looking.

Thanks for looking.

Wouldn't call this a portrait, but it is a great picture. I have also sometimes problems to choose a category. Good Luck.