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Critique please, especially if you have advices how to make the

picture better.

Picture has been scanned from the original negative and

unfortunately I'm not a magician with photoshop.

Right region you guessed but the city is Otranto.

Thanks for the comment.

Ciao,

Jan

7/7. I just can't comment, I'm without words.

Could you tell something of the lights you used?

Is it a digital picture or with film? Which camera and lens?

If it's film photograph, which film you used and how was it developed and picture printed?

I can't see anything there could be done better, I just couldn't find the models phone number, could I have it...? I'm joking.

Please, go on with your work. I am already admiring you after your first photograph.

1. Throw away the digital camera, buy a new better one or go back to film. Picture quality is really bad.

2. With shorter depth of field the family would be more in focus, not the family and the park bench together.

3. Little less cropping, would be nicer to see also the arms of the adults and not to have to guess if the head of the woman has been cut or not.

4. How would have been the photo if we could see the faces?

5. Subject is good.