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greg neils

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    Lily

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    I really like the photo. I jumps off the page! The only difficulty I have is with the out of focus thingy in the front. It draws me away from the photo. If you can bring that one into focus while keeping the back ground out of focus, I'd like it even more.

    Untitled

          1

    This is my first photo that I've captured a feeling. I really wanted

    to share this moment.

     

    All critiques are welcome. I'm working on getting my colors correct.

    Any help there is really appreciated.

  1. It jumps from the page. It brings out emotion. Everything is sharp. The light for the house is in a perfect position. With such a dark picture, was it post edited, filtered...? The waves are still very crisp and detailed. I've love to know the details of how it was done.
  2. I agree that the cloulds and the alignment are very good. Don't crop right, i think it looks worse. Crop the top off just above the ruins corner and it clears things up. But don't look to carefully as 1/2 and 1/2 photo then plays tricks with the eyes that you crop doesn't.

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    Fear

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    Everywhere I move, she is looking at me. Love it. If only I had this effect on other pretty girls. Very well framed, great lighting on the face, and a nice touch of wind compliment your expressive model very well.

    spike

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    At this point she should be looking to see where to place the ball. She's made the contact and hopefully scored the point. Good jumping skills. Good framing and focus on the picture. Its hard wit the net in the way any you did a good job. Good job with the collers too.

    Leaping Pony

          8
    Nice action shot. The tail is a nice feature of this photo. I'd like to remove the fence from the background, but the land owner would probably have an issue with that.

    Fish

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    You've managed to make this fish fly. Both fly off the page and in the water. The fun colored background adds to the fishes colors instead of distracts. Great photo.

    Untitled

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    This shot is incredible for the details you've brought out in an amazingly fast car going across the camera. If the background was a little bit more blurred to give it the illusion of speed and to make the car stand out from the background it would help a little. Why a red and white race car with a red and white race track behind it? If I had a choice I'd make the colors different (I'm not sure if you had a choice in the matter).
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