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elenaexisting

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    Vitali

          5
    I say bravo -- something about this portrait conjured up memories of the Flemish School of portrait painting and sent me off on an internet hunt to re-remember who the Dutch masters were. (I am ashamed to admit I didn't pay close enough attention in my Art History class, and will claim being worn out by the Italian Renaissance as my only defense.) As long as I'm lost in Art 105: fine use of chiarroscuro. I love this portrait.

    Untitled

          4
    Just a thought, Derek: When I saw this picture, I immediately thought that "something" must be happening, but struggled to figure out what the "something" was....what you were trying to show me. A good title could have helped me out here, but "untitled" left me frustrated.

    Parque Eduardo VII

          4
    At first the white line of the sidewalk running horizontally across the grass (I'm guessing on sidewalk) was distracting. But after a second look, I realized that it helped to encourage my gaze downwards toward the distant square/courtyard so that I really appreciated the depth of perspective.

    Delivered

          36
    I love the geometry and flow of the lower portion -- great lines marching in unison. The top of the shot was a little busy for me and pulled my attention upward and away from the more interesting part of the photo.

    UnTitled

          1
    Fascinating window. I've never seen anything like it. I'm not sure I would have shot this from the side (but maybe you were trying to reduce glare?). I wanted to have a clearer view of what was hanging from the little panes, and a forward angle would have worked better for me.

    Untitled

          15
    I thought they looked like cannon barrels at first. Beautiful and disturbing. One minor distraction, for me was the pine tree in the background -- in my mind, it clashed with the industrial/mechanical intensity of the rest of the photo. Doesn't seem to bother anybody else so. Congrats on such an unusual photo!

    full

          4
    I like your ability to toy with and question people's assumptions and reactions. Most people would rank a water-steeped ashtray right up there on the disgusting index. But you make it so pretty -- like a kaleidoscope. Nifty.

    Untitled

          4
    Really striking and great eyes. The only detail I don't like is the little dangling piece of chain link belt which looks like a tale sprouting from the posterior. Then again, may or may not be appropriate to the subject? :-)

    Tanya

          6
    Lovely color balance and placement. The blues in the bandana and necklace create interesting complementary boundaries to frame in the face.

    Grasshopper

          3
    Hi joe, to explain my original comment: the most in-focus part of this shot is the texture of the wall in front of (above) the insect. I think most photographers would have centered the focus on the bug itself. Not sure if the focal point on the wall texture was intentional or not, but the reason why I like it is because it conjures up the (metaphorically of course) the point of view of the grasshopper/cricket. This becomes a more interesting picture because I get a little flash of insight into what the cricket might be focused on, rather than what the photographer is focused on. It's four in the morning here, so not sure if my explanation is as lucid as I would like it to be, but hope that explains my original comment better.

    Untitled

          10
    I think this was a beautiful idea, with gorgeous colors and clean lines, but I am wondering if the composition balance is a bit awkward. The large pot at the top of the frame is a great focal point, as are the dark doors, windown, and shadows at the bottom of the frame, but they compete with each other for attention. I would experiment with cropping this image in different ways -- but this is only one opinion.
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