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raisa

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    Timeout

          6
    definetely a great moody picture! i would've loved to see it from another angle, get more of the face. Meanwhile, i think you couldn't have put together subject and background better than this in order to emphasise the mood. Cool!

    Untitled

          4
    definetely a good one. Right hand and side of the face seem a bit burnt out to me, but at the same time i like to think that's the effect you wanted to show, as it emphasizes more the shinny outfit and thus, the whole ideea of the picture.

    olive oil

          24
    E#xcellent! i would've removed the shoes, or at least try to show not such a "neat" image of them. The hole pic looks top fashion though! love it!

    "Dreaming"

          8
    i try to imagine it in color but what i see doesn't look very good, while B/W emphasizes so well this "slik" mood! i like it like this, don't change anything.

    Affection

          25
    lovely composition and color tones. absolutely great! it gave me goose bumps, made me smile, brought back memories... all at the first look and at the same time! i can't stop looking at his small hand, so carrying, so protective... Same w/ the look... i am speechless!

    Commercial??

          4
    Her chin, breast and belly line definetely don't look very fashionable to me, so you might want to work more on the model pose. You have a slight problem w/ her right eyebrow and the way her hair is arranged also. Try paying attention to her nails, next time -in fashion perfect hands and nails is a must! i could congrat you for cromatic composition, it is quite an interesting attempt.

    Entangled Angel...

          15
    excellent concept! might be a succesfull magazine pictorial if you'd come up w/ a full series! i like how the legs and left hand look look twisted and unrealistic, helping more to the plot ofthe picture. Also light and colors help a lot!Great idea and work!

    in that special day

          15
    i think her look would've been better on the water's surface, a bit more towards the camera than so far away as it is in this pic. Another thing that bothers is her left hand that lacks esthetics a bit, looking like it's broken or something. Still, beautiful dress, model, flowers, composition -one of the best wedding pics i've ssen so far.
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