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raisa

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    Charlotte

          6
    skin tones on the legs a bit to harsh, that's what bothers a bit. perfect fashion pose, not to mention the lovely "background"! Congrats!

    Dress

          2
    somehow that top stands out too much. i guess it is because of the bra visible lines interfearing with the lines on teh top.. don't know.. i guess it would've been much better w/o that bra'. chest skin a bit overexposed, but doesn't bother as much as the top being overexposed on the right. lovely ideea though, not to talk about the model pose. definitely an original shot!

    Pinked

          5
    first of all congrats for the colors! great combination of gray, black and pink. try working a bit on the way light falls over the model. i think the right side of the face (especially the eye) didn't get to much advantage out of this. the model has a great body, outfit as well. you do a good job!

    Keeping innocence

          4
    i would've worked more on the hair... make it a bit more shinny, give it some shape... it is much to natural for the sexy, extravagant outfit. also i think that being able to see the whole right eyebrow would've been improved the shot and the model's look. Else, i must admit this was an excellent idea, very sexy model and a great color tones combination. Lovely!

    lady

          22
    Definetely a wonderfull and elegant line! i tend to be a bit bothered about the tone difference on the wall and the hair on the back. i love the way you've played w/ diagonal lines and your persepctive towards the model. Congrats, this one is just lovely! i'll run to check in your portfolio! ;-)

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          13
    Beautiful! i like it a lot! The green tones are lovely and eyecatching -nicely fitting the skin tones and teh babckground. Congrats.

    Untitled

          11
    Excellent pose and model! i wish you didn't lose the details of hand and hair on the left side, but it's just a thought... a great picture, congrats!
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