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raisa

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  1. LOVELY! she is such a beauty! the picture is great, i think you've made a perfect choice in focusing on the eyes, i like the angle and the framing. If you want to play w/ DOF effects, try using a 50mm lens f/1.4 or f/1.8. It will give you great final results! Once again, congrats for this beautiful angel!

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    light a bit to harsh on the upper arm, focus seems more on the blouse than on the eyes -not sure if you intended it like this. Try it w/o the black canavas. Don't know why, but i have this feeling that will improve the pic. Else, i love the framing, angle is more than perfect, and the model... just BEAUTIFUL!

     

    Four times pink

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    just lovely! i must admit that postprocessing is "no comment". the shot makes me think about happy things, both you and the model have probably put a lot of work into this one! from my point of view it is absolutely LOVELY! simple, sensual, happy, sweet, sexy... Congrats and a 7/7!

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    good pose. seems a bit burnt on the left side of the face. in my oppinion you have too much useless space on the right side of teh model, so i would try to crop part of that out. it's just a thought, but try giving it a chance. Good model, keepp him around for more pics! ;)

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    excelent composition, lovely colors. I would improve a bit the position of her right hand, a bit bent, but even like this i think it is a pro level shot! Congrats!

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    one more detail that i thik it is of important relevance towards fashion photography: try matching the accessories -in yor case the ring which is very nice (and well balanced in terms of colors w/ the chair), doesn't match the earings at all. i've looked over your portfolio... Great stuff in there! you are showing us really good and inspired work! Good Luck!

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    excellent! i would fill in the shadows on the left side of her face using a reflector, but this is just an idea of mine... Congrats!
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