michaeldaggett

Thoughts?

cc welcomed. I do know i should have had the other leg bent.. ugh..

cc welcomed

cc welcomed

Thanks Les!

 

I like what you've done.  Her skin tone is naturally light, so perhaps you went a touch too far for 'reality' but I generally get the picture.  I appreciate your input - thanks!

cc welcomed

cc please

Nice work Mark - thanks for sharing, I learned many things as well.  :)

A hair light would eliminate her head bleeding into the background. I'm also not crazy about the shadows that are cast from her arms. There isn't enough light on her hands.

 

I like it conceptually though.

Nice image - I personally would have cropped out the driver, and shown more of the image on the left side to keep the aspect ratio. Everything else is technically good to my eyes.

Well done - IMO the sandal ruins the mood.

The color version of this shot is much better.  It seems sharper to me.  This photo caught my eye and brought me to the rest of your work! Nice Job!

Great Job!

Lovely model, lovely location, the pose is too awkward for me, she doesn't appear comfortable for that relaxed setting. Plus I think her skirt is too short for that composition.

Nice - without the caption I'd be lost though! Nice Work 7

Yup! That did it - 7

Thanks Les! The shirt is her photography shirt, she was helping me on a photoshoot and wanted to wear it. This was a test shot before the client showed up :)

Very nice. The headdress bleeds into the background too much I think though.

When you get tired of seeing my images you'll tell me what you don't like so I can

make them better.

Nice!

I think it is too tight. If there were even black space around the entire image it would help.also the straps on the girls dress should be fixed. I have a hard time seeing this type of stuff as I'm shooting, but I'm trying. I get too wrapped up on the technical side, I forget the composition side :)

ISO 6400 Ipad light

Awesome! Great Work!

I like this! Well done!

Thanks!

 

I agree with the hot spots! I spent some time cloning them out - it's a bit of work, but I got it. I also did brighten the face some more - good catch, I thought maybe the eyes were too bright and bringing up the face helped. Thanks for the advice!