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goulden

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  1. i've recently done my first live concert shots outdoors in full daylight and it's not easy to get an atmospheric shot. onlt criticism of this is that when singers sing, they are generally so close to the microphone that it normally obscures a large part of their face/mouth. any shots of him when you can see all of his face not behind the mic?
  2. Very good flatering portrait of a performer in action. maybe try a slightly tighter crop as there is a bit too much space on the right. shame you clipped off the very top of her head and would be nice if her eyes were a bit more open but they are only minor niggles in a technically very impressive concert shot

    Aspiration

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    really stunning shot! so clean. I'd maybe make it even bluer/colder. One tiny freckle/spot on her chin that I think I'd airbrush out. I'd be interested in seeing a scan of the original shot you took

    Untitled

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    What's this photo being used for? I really don't like direct flash in performance photography, it's unflattering and loses any atmosphere. This photo is an interesting idea but with what looks like a modern office block behind the singer, it makes a very strange composition

    Swoon

          2
    it's very grainy which doesn't really work in this case. also, the square crop isn't very flattering but a nice enough capture under very bland lighting conditions

    Untitled

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    took me a while to work out what i was looking at. a few small niggles i have. a bit too grainy for this type of photo. maybe the dof is a little too much as it would be good to see the background just a little less obscurely blurred

    drum

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    has potential but the flash lighting has taken any kind of atmosphere out of the shot. the cropping of the shoe does nothing for me. The whole focal of the picture seems to be the carpet which I doubt was the intent

    Untitled

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    would prefer to see a bit more of her face and i think it needs a slight crop to the top. But great lighting, location and muted colours

    Soft Glow

          12

    maybe keep the glow, but take a bit of it off the face and sharpen that up. It's a great poster image though. also, personally don't like the style of text at the bottom. the logo is very sharp in contrast to the bassist so maybe add some small effect to it too?

     

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