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yankfan

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    Untitled

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    This has the feel of one of those Anne Geddes photos. Nicely done. I didn't rate this however. I'd rather express myself thru comment.

    Spring Beauty

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    I'd like it better if the highlights weren't as blown out. That applies also to the sky. I'd love to see this with a bright, blue sky. It would enhance this lovely composition so much better. Hope that helped.
  1. I'm troubled by the sky. It seems a little washed out, and the center mountains seem to be obscured by a haze of sorts. I like how the element of the three stones lead me to the center of the shot. Maybe a tighter crop vertically to eliminate either the left or right hand side would enhance the framing. I don't know...I may not know what I'm talking about, since this is the way you shot it, so obviously you liked it as is.
  2. I didn't rate this, because I don't subscribe to the whole ratings system. I do like your framing, but the right side of the shot seems like there's some lens flare in there somewhere. It's just a little too light, if you know what I mean. The hill and trees seem a little dark also. Take it for what it's worth, as I'm just a rank amateur. :)

    blue tit

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    Personally, I'd clone out the top and bottom branches as they really don't contribute to the shot. I'd also like to see a little more of the tit's belly. It seems a bit underexposed. Hope this helps a little.
  3. I really don't know...it looks like you're shooting thru a screen of some kind. The sky is really blown out, and the shot appears to be leaning to the right. Rather than leave you a rating, I think it's more important to actually tell you what I like and don't like about this one. I'd love to see it again with a bright blue sky behind it. I like how the buildings on both sides lead you right to the center structure, but again it needs a better sky--and maybe some increase in saturation. Hope this helps.
  4. Nice colors, exposure is good, but in my opinion maybe could be cropped a little more on the left side and more area on the right to give the child more of an area to walk into. I didn't rate this one, because by leaving a comment, I've told you what I think. Numbers don't tell the whole story.

    Untitled

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    I think your black and whites of this are much better. The whole left side here seems blown out, and a hot spot in the reflection of the face is too much. Maybe dial down the exposure? JMHO.

    Untitled

          3
    The transition from color to black and white is an interesting one, but somehow I feel the window frame really takes away from what you're trying to do here. I also think the window screen creates too much of a distraction. I also believe the picture could use a little straightening, as the way I'm seeing it, the whole thing seems canted to the right. I like your idea though. I hope this helps. I didn't rate this, because ratings don't accurately tell the whole story. Comments and critiques are what help us become better, not mere numbers.
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