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The transition from color to black and white is an interesting one, but somehow I feel the window frame really takes away from what you're trying to do here. I also think the window screen creates too much of a distraction. I also believe the picture could use a little straightening, as the way I'm seeing it, the whole thing seems canted to the right. I like your idea though. I hope this helps. I didn't rate this, because ratings don't accurately tell the whole story. Comments and critiques are what help us become better, not mere numbers.

hi John

 

thank yo for your advices, agree with you, welcome your comment in the future, have a nice day