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Long exposure, no artificial light. One very still couple.

I do love it too. Very very nice!

Comments appreciated - shot with a Nikon N2000, on 800 ISO fuji

cheap film from Wal-mart. The only lens available was my 50mm/1.8,

and of the whole shoot, I love this one the best. Check out the

rest if you like.

I think I consider this shot to be the signature shot for my Relay

for Life pictures. The bags on the right are lumineries for

survivors and nonsurvivors of cancer, and the people on the left are

walking for the relay. I think the reason I this this is a strong

image is because there is no identity in the people - all of them

supporting this cause selflessly.

Please, comment. This is not a snapshot, but a well planned

picture, and I accomplished what I had in my mind's eye at the

time.

 

Again, comment. Please.

A child looks away from the list of names of cancer victims and

survivors during the luminery ceremony.

In the multitude of emotions, anger and hate are some of those felt, yes. Does it do well in expressing, or is there a lack of emotion?

Comments are appreciated.

Ok, the subject isn't a serious one, but I am trying to express a

serious feeling with this shot. I dodged the eye in the darkroom to

bring it out, and over developed my film to achieve increased

contrast. I was told by one of the local commercial photographers

that my images are flat. Any suggestions? Comments? Anything

would be appreciated, comments with ALL ratings as well.

I wish his eyes were in sharper focus. It looks like you have focused on his chin.

Having a friend as beautiful and willing to pose as Heather is makes

her portraits easier than most. I would appreciate comments. Does

this composition work? Does the angle add to this shot, or take

away? Please, feedback is more useful than numbers, but if you don't

have the tim to make an effort with a comment, a rating with help as

well.

Does this effetively express anger? If not, what suggestions would

you have for improvements, and what do you get from it as is?

Thanks for the comment. I have tried putting a light fabric over the light (a very bright desklamp) to create a softer look, and I'll have to try it again when I do another shoot.

Your composition in this shot woul have been strong had you had some interestiing details in the esky. As is, you have a lot of wasted space witht the blank sky.

Comments are appreciated. This is my first go at cross processing

slide film. This slide film was processed c-41, and has hahd no

color manipulation. Please, leave comments and feedback!

Comments appreciated.

Comments appreciated.

I'm working on my photojournalism skills. This is the audience at

one of our campuses coffehouses where Johnny Walker (a

comedian/singer/songwriter) performed. Comments would be greatly

appreciated!

Comments welcomed.

Perhaps a horizontal format would be better for this shot. I think I see what you're going for, but you're lacking on execution.

All this needs is a good story to accompany it in a paper.

Comments appreciated on this candid portrait.

Excellent composition, beautiful exposure.

Love the composition. Love the picture. I have to wonder though, there is so much going on in this sculpture, did you take more with different focus?

Beautiful!

Has this been solarized?