melody1 0 Posted May 3, 2005 A child looks away from the list of names of cancer victims and survivors during the luminery ceremony. Link to comment
joe604 0 Posted May 4, 2005 Melody, this is an excellent shot. The child's half face is very expressive and perfectly captured. The tapering leading lines created by the candlelight take the eye across the image and back to the child's face -- a simple but effective composition. Unfortunately, the white spot at the top of the page disrupts the leading lines and is a distraction. The same can be said about the floating red spot. Have a look at your image with the white spot removed and also with both of the floating spots removed. It will be great. Congratulations. --Joe Link to comment
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