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sterioma

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    The eyes

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    I wonder how a tighter framing might have worked here. Good shot. You might have considered cleaning/cropping that white spot on the left side before posting.

    magic water

          2
    Interesting composition. I have the impression, though, that the feet should have had more "weight", maybe shooting a bit closer so that they appeared bigger.

    Numble, Numble

          29
    Cute expression indeed, but I tend to agree with most remarks made by Barry (especially the first one). Portraits are not easy as they seem, and I also have a lot to learn about them in the first place!

    Untitled

          2
    There's a feeling of emptiness here. Maybe the inclusion of a person would help to give a single point of interest to make it easier for the eye to rest somewhere.

    Sunday Walk

          15

    Do you think this might have worked better with the person (my wife)

    entering into the frame from the left instead of going out from the right?

    Boats

          9
    Roberto, ti ringrazio per il tuo commento aperto e onesto! Sono contento che altre mie foto ti siano piaciute :)

    La mia intenzione fotografando era quella di riprendere delle macchie di colori, soprattutto la barca blu e arancione e i riflessi dei palazzi in primo piano. Se la composizione ti sembra troppo "affollata", forse avrei potuto isolare meglio la barca con il 200 anziche' usare il 105.

  1. Again you're playing with the lines of the human body, with people sitting at the bar and you got another winner.

    I would have liked to see this one stop darker: maybe the man in the foregroung would have been silhouetted (and thus enhanced the contrast with the other one) and you would have gained also some more detail on the man in the background.

    Il Lampione

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    Uwe, thanks for your comment!

    Indeed, this was not shot around noon, as you can see from the shadow of the light on the wall (almost horizontal). Maybe it was around 5.30 PM, if I remember correctly. Who knows, maybe a couple of hours later this might have really been better! :)

    Lack of detail is something which is recurring when I use my 28mm lens, maybe that glass is just too soft...

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