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richard van hoesel

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    Hanauma Bay

          52
    Vincent, there's a whole bunch of stuff here that I'd normally think to be a real bad idea; velvia in the middle of the day, added a polarizer to an over-saturated film in bright sun, included lots of people in a nice landscape etc. but it all works rather nicely here. The lower right-hand fragment reminds me of a postcard from the 50's for some reason.

    The Sonoma Coast

          7
    Real nice Steve - great palette (you know I'm a sucker for low light coastal scenes). Funny how some parts of the water look like a much shorter exposure than 10sec - I've seen that sort of thing on some of my own shots too.

    The Homestead

          25
    Very painterly indeed Carol. The tank doesn't detract/distract at all for me. I can't see the suggestion to hide it behind the stump improving the image either; not only would it destroy your diagonal design that works so well here, but I think connecting the stump to the house would be problematic. The placement of the folliage around the stump in the lower RHC is a nicely understated finishing touch too.

    Time #2

          11
    thanks for clarifying Emil - yes on closer examination I see it's from the same neg, although the results indeed look totally different. I certainly like the rough 'organic' look of the liquid emulsion print but also find myself wishing it would have preserved some of the fine details evident in the straight scan.

    Time #2

          11
    Emil, I'm perpetually amazed at the images you produce - I've not seen anything quite like your work. Do you have any plans to collect these into a book? As to the comparison between the two images For my taste the destruction on this one is getting a little heavy handed - ideally I think I'd like to see something between the two. By the way, it took me a while to find the other version since I didn't know which folder you were talking about ('more killings' in case anyone else has the same problem).

    Sharp angles

          13
    Just when I thought architectural photography was rather dull... this is great. I feel I might have liked just a tiny bit more space at the top, but on the other hand, having that point close to the edge adds a lot of tension.
  1. Looks great John. All the converging lines provide lots of layers and although they perhaps make the image a little busy on this scale, for me they become the coi and make this work on a more abstract level. I too would be tempted to try some burning in towards the horizon, particularly in the top left to contain the image a little better there.

    Palms at Sunset

          39
    First of all, yes you certainly captured a beautiful sky in this image. Although I agree the fill looks a little unnatural, the elements where I see most room for improvement are in adjusting the brightness of the rightmost quarter of the image and framing the shot so that the main palm didn't touch the top.

    First ice

          9
    Fine work again Atle. My only suggestion is in line with the comment that the foreground could be a little brighter. Maybe a 0.9 grad, slightly rotated to follow the direction of the waterline would have been a choice worth trying here.

    Black Rock

          10
    beautiful shot with terrific light indeed - I wonder if a vertical, taken a few steps to the right with that branch there prominantly placed in the foreground might have been even stronger?
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