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t._n._williams

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    Ring pull

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    Did you really get that shot this year?? I ask only because I haven't seen a pull tab since early childhood. If you do have those kinds of tabs available to you now....... The nostalgic in me would love to see the whole tab. Or even one that has been removed with a good curl to it.

     

    As for you photo. I like the condensation sweat. Maybe blur out more of the can top to put more emphasis on just the ring. Just a thought.

     

    tn

  1. The colors of the flora are just stunning. They certainly caught my eye. But as a picture of the Mosque it is lacking. I don't see enough of the Mosque. The spires on the right are hidden and yet peeking out. I would love to see more of the Mosque, from what I can see it is stunning.

     

    tn

    leaving...

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    Good concept. The carpet it the real detractor here. Try cropping some of it out. Better yet shoot it again. I don't know exactly what the problem with the carpet is... too dark, too blurred, not enough blur. There is just something not right. Again, I like the concept.

     

    tn

    Rainbow

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    There is an interesting effect going on here with the rainbow arch. I like the asymmetry of it. But the weird tilt on the two buildings in the foreground just kind of ruin it. But I really like the rainbow arch.

     

    tn

  2. I like these pictures. I don't know what is most impressive to me the fact that you made your own pinhole, or that you managed to get such good pictures from the pinhole. Great job. I like the area you chose to photograph as well.

     

    tn

    Untitled

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    Interesting character, but the parking lot is too distracting. Next time go for a shallower dof and blur out the cars. Better yet shoot him from the other side, if that background is less distracting. I would also crop out the bench sign, it is so sharp it distracts from this interesting character. Good concept.

     

    tn

    Metal Bridge

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    This photo is very interesting. I too like the lines. I think that you are right about blacking out the end....... but I think it needs to be more of a dark grey than true black. The black is to harsh/obvious, a dark grey would be more in keeping with the rest of the picture.

    Untitled

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    I would crop out the ceiling, there does seem to be a lot of dead space. That being said, I love the image. It looks like the scene taken straight out of high school. A lowly teen dejected, haunting the halls alone. Broken heart? Peer Pressure? Bully? Thanks for the flashbacks.

     

    tn

    Untitled

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    The reflection could be interesting. But the road & power lines........... They just don't belong. The turf island is not very appealing either. The birds aren't close enough to merit being in the picture. That being said.... Crop and keep cropping until you find an image you like. That is more important than what I think anyway.

     

    tn

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