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wenger

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    Pretty good shot. (IMO) while the soda cup ads some realism, it takes away from the overall appeal of the shot. I'd try it again without it.

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    The composition in this one is certainly better than the first. Getting the whole palm on the right in the frame would be better. The clouds lost some of their punch in this rendition.

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    I agree... the composition is good. I also generally like it. I really like how the shadow forms a complimentary "spoke". But with that said... something also bothers me. Maybe that it's just a bit too cluttered feeling... I'm not sure.

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    I agree with Brian. I would have given another mark higher if the bottom right blended with the rest of the picture. It looks like you used a flash that brightened this area, but didn't reach the rest of the structure. You probably would have done better with no flash at all and a tripod. Otherwise I really like the composition.
  1. I'd have had no idea what this was were it not for your caption. Don't get me wrong - some of my favorite pictures I have no clue what they are - but they generally bring something else to the table. Way too hazy to be intersting in my book.
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