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I think the background is a little too cluttered, but the girl herself says so much. The little smile that is contrary to the sign she is holding and shows she is unaware of the gravity of the situation. It just makes it all the more obvious that she is a pawn of her parent's agenda. A point which is even more exemplified by the tether on her wrist. A shallower depth of field may have helped.
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Cute, but a little too busy. What if you moved the man to about the middle between the 2 womens hands and put the woman just to the right (viewer's right) of him holding his hand and eliminate the girl (for simplicity sake). You will probably need to shift the camera to the right a little also. This all may give these fake humans a more "real" appearance and make the photo less busy.
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Very clever. Cool colors. Nice imagination. -
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A little more DOF to get the fence in focus would help.
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This is nice, but I think it could be better. First, it seems a bit blurry. Sharper focus on the wind screens would be better. I would suggest cropping to get rid of the 2 screens in the bottom right, but then you would lose too much of the cool curves. Can you retake the photo at an angle to eliminate these, but retain the curves?
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I'm not sure I like that the limbs are extending beyond the frame to the left.
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Unique.
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I think if you would have stepped 3-5 steps to the left this would have been a much more interesting picture.
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I can't think of a thing I'd change. -
The points of interest here just aren't that interesting. Maybe a closer point of view on one of the trees would help.
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I think another point of interest would help this photo a lot. Maybe a sailboat or fishing boat off to the left. As it is it seems a bit done over.
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I like the mix of the statue and cloth. You also chose a provacative camera angle.
I have a similar shot check out this shot if you get a chance.
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IMO just not enough of interest here. -
Boy, I wish there was a little more depth of field here. It is almost a really great shot. I also don't like the yellow leaf.
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What kind of bars are you hanging out in?? ... oh missed the caption... whoops!
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Hmmm... certainly makes you wonder.
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What a cool room to give you such cool reflections/shadows off the floor and tables. Nicely conceived and executed.
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I like the way this tells a story and yet leaves a lot to the imagination. I do wish the white cup wasn't there, but what were you going to do - ask them to hold on while you moved the cup? Nice work.
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Generally I find this attractive, but the lighting seems a little incongruous. The mountain in the back seems too brightly lit for where the sun would have to be to light the sky that way.
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Are her eyes retouched in PS? They are certainly BLUE and this was from before colored contacts were a big thing. I'm not sure I like her expression.
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Rating 6/5 based on this being an advertising picture for this particular product and not an "art" photo. Maybe a little less light on the logo. I like the way it shines, but this is maybe too much. -
Josep - I agree that this too is a bit grey. Is this lack of full contrast noticable on the negatives or just on the prints?? Are you developing yourself?
Also I have another cropping/angle of attack idea. Would you be able to take about 5 steps to the right and take the shot with only 1/2 of the dead tree? I like the look of the dead tree very much, but I am not that crazy about the evergreen. I suggest taking the 5 steps before taking the shot to keep the "V" of the valley in close to the center of the picture.
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Josep - This and a few other of your photos seem too dark. Maybe a fill flash would help. Also I've included a cropping suggestion -just a suggestion.
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