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fotoscopio

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    Untitled

          10
    I like the theme and the tonality, well shot and composed. The only thing I didn't find appealing is the blurred hair, it goes from blurry to sharp in a horizontal gradient, it looks odd.

    Window

          4
    I like the complementing colours in your shot and the way the exposition is really good showing both indoor and outdoor lights as glowing, yet the composition is lacking, I imagine there weren't many places from where you could shot this picture but this one didn't help much, probably cropping and rotating a bit might help.

    Untitled

          11
    I really like this shot, if anything I would have tried to include the full foremost tree -and a wider angle- instead of cropping the top, but I appreciate it could have been impossible.

    Self

          2

    Good portrait,

     

    I like the expression the most, would have left the top of the head in the frame, and some fill light on the left wouldn't hurt.

    Black Sea

          8

    Nice composition in 3 tones.. the sky's darkness is too much though, probably the sea (your main subject) would benefit from a lighter sky.

     

    The big foamy area, the disperse sea-birds and the splashing wave, integrate nicely in your shot. 5/6

    Untitled

          4

    The composition is quite pleasing, a big stretch of textured background in earth tones and an interesting spot off-centre in one corner with lots of contrast.

     

    The idea works great, but in this case, the background is off-focus defeating the purpose of giving it most of the frame, the bird's detail are lost in both shadow and highlight. So the end product looks like a blurry thing shot with a very unsharp lens and with all the contrast in the wrong places.

     

    Hope it helps,

    Flower seller

          2

    Fantastic expression... but those eyes!!

     

    Seen "Larger", the detail is rich, contrast good, the works... still those deep set eyes!

     

    Great shot! Love the inclusion of the "roses" sign.

    ...

          5

    Nice gloomy feel to it... probably too light for my taste, maybe a darker overall feel (without loosing detail) would help it stand out better.

     

    Nice choice for B&W.

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