rory daniel - singapore ph

April 30, 2005

It doesn't look like a cocoon to me - it looks more like feathering in PS. Rather than enhancing the pic, it gives the game away.

April 29, 2005

I like the composition...but, I find the added noise a little too distracting.

April 28, 2005

Found at a frog farm in Singapore. What does this image say to you?

March 5, 2005

Consider blurring one of the elements to add a new dynamic - currently it is a little static.

March 5, 2005

What I meant to say was: does the head on the RIGHT dominate the image (too much)...

March 5, 2005

Does the head on the left dominate this image for you? Does the

man's face get lost in the busy-ness of this image?

January 26, 2005

...or does it work?

January 25, 2005

The dark haze around the main subject is distracting - consider toning it down a little.

January 25, 2005

consider removing blemishes from metal

January 24, 2005

Does the broken trunk add to the image - I'm not sure it does.

January 24, 2005

consider cloning the plane tracks in the sky - they DO detract from the image - and they're not natural (as the rest of the image is).

January 24, 2005

Consider another crop - possibly vertical to exclude the cameramen and empty space at left. Colourisation? Mmmm, not sure it works in this case - they're too small.

January 24, 2005

Original or done to death? Is the leg in the background obvious to

the casual viewer - or do I know it's there because I was there?

January 24, 2005

Consider making the frame bigger at the top and cloning in some additional background to make the locust more central to the frame - as it is currently, it is too high and there isn't enough breathing space between the edge and the antenna. Also, consider cropping to remove dead space at the left hand side.

January 15, 2005

consider cropping out some sky...

January 15, 2005

consider remving the white spec

January 15, 2005

consider putting the feature cherry somewhere other than dead-centre.

January 15, 2005

consider removing the black dot to left of statue.

January 15, 2005

sadly, without people and life, this image lacks something...

January 15, 2005

The unusual composition of this image really works. The strength of the rock on the right not only physically balances the image, but it represents what the climbers are contemplating. Powerful and well-envisioned.

January 14, 2005

Grasses distracting? No, I think they give an added dynamic to the landscape - bravo for keeping them in.

January 7, 2005

...consider cropping the lower part of the image - the lower right hand side is devoid of interest (yet the top parts are very interesting).

January 6, 2005

I would highly recommend cropping and straightening this image as it leans to the right.

You could also consider cropping it into a panoramic view, removing most of the stairs and wall, leaving the people to tell the story without the clutter.

Well observed - bravo!

January 6, 2005

...a little dark?

January 6, 2005

remove the clothing tag and the 'red eye'

Sign In

Profiles

Forums

Blogs

Events

Downloads

Gallery

Store

Image Comments posted by rory daniel - singapore ph