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    Morning Bliss

          23
    yes, a fantastic moment, beautifully rendered, a real story, great stuff. the brightest whites are just a touch too hot on my monitor (i have this problem with digital photos all the time and adjust them selectively constantly in photoshop), but its a quibble and easily adjusted if you think it worth doing.

    "Reach"

          11
    thanks Wilson, I've got a few shots in my portfolio of basketball -- shot a lot of it, but at a more junior level where the light is worse, i dont usually achieve quite this clarity though -- its inspiring to see what's possible.

    Blue

          19

    no, babel fish! (thanks for being a good sport, I got a good laugh working on the translation while helping my son with his grammar homework -- I can barely write english, let alone french, without help!)

     

    Translation -- "Symmetry is a complexity-reducing concept (co-routines include subroutines); seek it everywhere."

     

    Just hangin out

          4
    good moment, but the flash kills it for me, as the shadowing and harsh differences in lighting take away from the atmosphere. not sure what camera/lens you are using, but consider getting a "fast" lens if you like this shooting a lot. it helps to be able to freeze the action without a flash or with minimal flash. i use lenses that let me get to at least 2.8 aperture and preferably 1.8 for indoor kids gyms.

    Untitled

          6
    marc, a very elegant photo, enjoyable composition and a well captured subject, love the light on her face and pose, and the use of the window as a background. one suggestion, there's a fair amount of grain. without judging it, as it is certainly a valued part of such documentary photos, i offer the suggestion that you try software like neat image if you want to smooth out the grain. i use a free downloadable demo that i got from their site when i want to do that. works pretty well.
  1. to me, part of the charm of the photo is the weather beaten quality of the original shot. at first glance, john's version is prettier, at second glance, linda's original more satisfying to me. i agreed with susan's first comment, which seems to have disappeared.

    "Big Brother"

          5
    you are doing great al, the colors and tones are very nice. i like to play with images like this, to try different compositions and tones and tints and croppings, to give alternative takes -- here i'd consider a tighter crop with much to the right of the animal eliminated.

    "J" - hair stylist

          13
    yes, you have proven her wrong! like the composition, particularly the use of the curving hair o the right side. such a strong, beautiful face! a couple of things -- you might want to check out neat image, its software, there's a free downloadable demo that I use, that helps to smooth out the image a little, particularly if you sharpen, which it looks like you may have done a little here. also, i like to play with images like this in black and whites and with tints. it helps me manipulate the tonal ranges more, and its just fun to try.
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