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joey

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    AT SEA

          22
    This is a beautiful shot, really well done. The big rock on the left is a bit distracing, but not too much. Great job.

    #2

          2
    The left half is a bit distracting. Try cropping it out totally and have the right half make a vertically oriented shot.

    Homeless in D.C.

          7

    There are too many distractions. Since the main subject is the guy looking over the ledge, you should concentrate on him make the shot much tighter. It would be even better if you could closer (maybe a 200mm lens or so) and get some face in the shot. Nice job though.

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    Untitled

          8
    I like it. The centered composition is a little distracting, but you captured the moment well. You should post smaller pictures, this one is hard to view, and somebody could take it and sell a digital print.

    Untitled

          3
    Why the black and white? What makes scenes like this (to me, at least) are the brilliant colors. Without color, the beach is a boring white mass. Good composition, though.

    Sunset

          2
    This looks underexposed, maybe an extra stop or two would have helped this picture. But as it is, it looks kind of abstract, not your typical sunset. Nice job!
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