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joey

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  1. I feel kind of like I drank too much caffeine. Aside from the shakiness, the picture looks distorted. Is this the lens, some digital editing, or just my eye? The composition is nice.
  2. Creepy! Interesting photo, but it is not as effective as it could be. The first thing I noticed that it is either out of focus or the lens is not sharp at all. It also looks a little overexposed.

    Angry Deer

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    Nicely done Lee. I think what this picture needs is a splash of color--most color pictures do. A little fill flash might have been good too, but then you would have scared the deer off. Good job.
  3. I think a graduated ND filter might help here, or at least a polarizer. If you can work it out with your lab, try overexposing and underdeveloping to get a greater tonal range.
  4. As you might be able to tell, this shot is overexposed. Notice how the sky is totally blown out and there are no true blacks. I've shot with the film you are using and printed with the same paper, and I know that the contrast range here can be handled. I would suggest about a stop less exposure, and a yellow or red filter on the lens to get some detail in the sky. You can also add a filter during printing, but that's no substitute for a bad negative. Nice composition too.
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