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    Trafalgar Square

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    Perhaps one of the most famous of London's squares, this shot shows the what the square seems to be most famous for - its pigeons (and also the statue of Lord Nelson on his column and also King George IV).

     

    I added some toning to this.

     

    All comments welcome!

    Today

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    Good observation on old versus new. I find the shot a bit centralised though...the building is just there, smack in the middle.

    What's the lightened blur, bottom centre?

  1. I think this is a strong shot; the angle it's taken from makes the castle look very imposing....looming over the viewer. Have you tried some selective lightening/darken around the castle structure.....this could help generate even more of an imposing feeling.
  2. This little fellow must have been missing its owner, somewhere in the

    back streets of Shibuya, Tokyo, May 2004. I liked the contrast

    between the soft fluffiness and the rather grotty chain link fencing.

    Lights

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    I think the focus should fall on one of the lamps (is that what they are?) that stands out in some way from the others, either by position or shape, preferably both. Consider moving one? Otherwise it seems a bit dull to me.

    ....

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    The lighting, pose and subject all come together really well here I think....says student angst or something similar.

    7 Mirrors

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    What a great shot! Looking at this makes me want to click the mouse on one of the mirrors to see the full sized version of the "thumbnsils" reflected in the mirrors. Well done too for not snapping yourself.

    Untitled

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    I like the composition and pose (and the model's expression too) but it seems you have taken this at the wide end of the lens' range leading to a distorted "cartoon" face which I don't think is particularly flattering to the model.

    the kiss

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    Love the composition and the nearly-kissing-but-not-quite arrangement. The soft pastel colours complement the subject very well too. (But it's a bit large!)
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