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jmonzani

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    Untitled

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    Good shot but too bad there are some scratches on it. Maybe you should print it with the black borders of the enlarger, so that the scratches and the border add a "rough" and industrial feeling to it.

    Untitled

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    Your porfolio has very good pics, and this one is great. I might look like an "easy" shot, but I'm sure it was not. Keep it simple, and the image works. Congrats.

    Midnight duet

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    This reminds me of Tim Burton's movies. The strange characters certainly enhance the mystery. I'm a bit skeptical regarding the bottom croping of the "moon".

    312.1

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    Your photo really caught my eye. At this size, the grain is invisible, I can hardly imagine that this has been shot with an ISO 3200. I love the aesthetic and the originality, it is a great job.

    Windows

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    I really love this shot, seeing the two girls adds a surrealistic touch to the picture and makes it quite fun and interesting. Plus, the colors work great too :)

    lake léman in CH

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    I don't agree with Christian's comment: I do find a lot of softness in the washed out blue of the scene. It does convey a sense of dreaming that more contrast would break.

    Eric

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    I really like the lightning in there, it has a great atmosphere. I had a look at your porfolios, and I think that this one is your best shot. There is a mood, the model is not posing and light makes it all. Cheers

     

    Untitled

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    I find the montage too obvious here, and the two photos don't really match. I really prefer your other shots in the same folder, some of them are really great. I feel like this photo is misplaced in there, don't you think so?

    Telling stories

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    Interesting idea. The framing gives a better pic than your first version. I especially like the bottom silhouette. However, it is a bit disturbing to have a reflection on the top-right photo. It could also be improved (maybe) by using a set of photos which are giving a "real" story (like a sequence of shots): in this approach, the silhouette could be the "hero" of the photographed story, and his silhouette, the "ending point". Hey, nice idea! I might try it out :) ! Cheers
  1. Original and fun series. My only concerne are variations in the sky and grass colors : you should (digitally?) change them to be all the same

    in every picture. Mainly because a lighter sky breaks the "sequence" effect. Otherwise, I really like these pics! Congrats!

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