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    Hovering

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    awesome capture. i know how much time it takes to have all the stars come together. just a suggestion, fwiw, the out of focus orbs are a bit big and distracting -- but they could be replaced -- by either a tighter crop and a bit more dark, or by other flora.

    shore

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    this is a pretty cool object and composition. i'm not sure of your process, but it could be even better if you could work on the tones and sharpness of the wood.
  1. Michael, First off, I like the direction you are going. There's good creative energy in your work and often you have some first rate images. I am not sure why you tosssed this one into critique. As a stand alone image its focus appears soft and it is certainly flat on the contrast. Is this perhaps an early attempt at printing? If so, say so, so that people can give you feedback regarding intent.

    Untitled

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    interesting. very interesting. i like interesting.

     

    did you know that michelangelo was panned for forsaking grace and beauty. they said he was too much about process.

    face square

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    this was scanned from an kodak e100sw transparency, so there is no grain from that process. perhaps you are seeing a compression artifact. of course the shot is very sharp and you may be seeing the powdered sugar as grain?
  2. it's not full of color and contrast and so it gets poor ratings on photo.net. here, the herd rules. but we all know that the art world is full of stories of how the masses often just don't get it. i'm not one into critiquing a photo by saying that it needs to be cropped a certain way or dodged another. but i can say that there is much more impact with this imag as it gets larger. the rain is really interesting. often times, the internet favors images that read better small. i've seen many thumbnails that were very hot looking, but when i saw the art in person it was weak. i think with this image that i would find the opposite.
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