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carl_williams

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  1. re: orientation - this way up gives the feel of both bits of the implement growing upwards towards the sky, and, IMO, works best. I like it because the composition is striking and the scale and nature of the subject is fairly ambiguous to start with - it looks "grown", perhaps like a weird termite mound or strange plant.

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    I like this. How d'you feel that moving the viewpoint a bit so that the vertical line of the doorframe wasn't central behind your head would look? Also, would modifying the light behind the door to something more diffuse, filling the gap and washing out the floor etc. the other side of the door, give a more X-filesey sort of feel? (perhaps a striplight as suggested, or perhaps just blast the scenery on the other side with a shedload of flash?)

     

    I quite like the wooden floor - it has a nice texture which looks good with a play of light across it like that. (I don't have the interrogation type associations, more sort of mysterious ones - mebbe the spotlight being a spot contributes to the interrogation feel?)

  2. I think this one looks more striking than the other of the same subject but I'm not entirely sure why. Looks a bit more dramatic to me. I think the sea is just a bit better and the focus is on the bright gap between

    the rocks on the left. The rock on the right helps to frame things. In the other picture, the extra bit of bright sky to the left just looks more distracting. I notice this one's narrower top to bottom - have you cropped out some sky? I wonder how it'd look with perhaps a slivver off the bottom (up to the bit where the shadow on the sand has that horizontal kink in it) and a touch more sky?

  3. I like this photo. Nice soft colours. Is it perhaps just shade over-exposed, though?

     

    I also liked the duckpond picture, although I'd say that one was definitely a bit over (that said, (a) I'm no expert, (b) it's your photo and © by the time it's been scanned, compressed and displayed on some random tired monitor, all bets are probably off...)

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