brother_soulnier

for my taste the model on the right makes this image, she is gorgeous, and no visible tattoos.
that is a wonderful bonus for subject interest of sensual female.

gorgeous light and pose, stunning model.

I like a lot about this image and all your details for presentation, but the oversharpening of the eyes is getting very overdone today, they almost take on a foreign look in the composition.
It's too unnatural looking, and 15 years from now her kids are going to wonder why it was done like that. :)

love the presentation, the shadow cast is stunning here, nice click.

Love the features of this model, and would love to see something more sophisticated, other than get nude and stand over there.
Maybe a tight evening dress, with a sneak a peek theme, and some dramatic lighting. She has such a sultry look, I think some refinement is in order.

Maybe I am getting old, and simple snap shot images don't have the impact of a planned set up.

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the subject had nothing to do with the name on the outside of the camera, it did however have to do with what happened on the inside of one of these.

I did not know that, as long as the person in the image likes it, it matters very little what anyone else thinks, I will keep this in mind. 

No critique needed here then.

to me the term "fat" would not describe the lighting condition you get when using an on camera flash. "flat" give you the message of no depth.

You will have to forgive me, I did not start getting serious about photography until the mid 70's I am little new at this...

wonderful deep image, would like to see the white pop just a little more.

I cannot find the icon, but two thumbs up, outstanding work, Bravo... spot on in every little detail...

I think you have a wonderful model here, and your camera work for details was spot on, gorgeous skin tone, and lovely information from her facial expression, but that fake brick background robbed this image from top spots. a cleaner BG would have done wonders here... all those lines eat up the smoothness of this subject composition.

If you are going to critique your own image, make sure you have the dialect right.
The photograph is a snapshot of your friend getting ready to mix a drink, and did not want to reveal  too much cleavage this day, so she pinned her blouse, in an obvious manner.
I see not more information from her than that, she is not communicating with the camera or photographer in any fashion.

beautiful facial details from shadowing, her hair framed her face very nice here, wonderful low light portrait, superb eye contact and color.

yes that is her dog in the background, and I did a slight vignette to this. I felt it helped to create a little more depth to the presentation.

I think the leave just scattered without the green border might work for this also.

I love the light here...

I think the subject of the clock dominates the composition, and that is underexposed by at least 2 stops.

John, there is a T on the left and a Y on the right, with respect to viewer orientation. T Y Thank you.

Thank You...

I like the lighter skin tone color saturation against her gorgeous hair, great image...