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    Great shot! To nit-pick your histogram reveals some blown-out highlights. I dropped the curve slightly and added local darkening of the cement wall ( a tad bright and distracting) to bring it under control and focus all attention on the model. What do you think?

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    Evening smile

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    I agree with the above however IMO you are disregarding wonderful elements via under-exposure or perhaps under-presentation. There are nice details ( bed sheet, floor etc) that are easily revealed by brightening shadow areas without adding noise or altering the mood. I'd be curious to see what you think of this:

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    Hi Gatis, nice shot. Because the lattice is so large and prominent in the photo, I'd apply leveling and crop in something like this: What do you think?

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    Hi Nima, a pleasing shot. My suggestion would be to shoot from a higher vantage point OR move closer. She is consumed by ( appears seated too low in) the boat. You can change the perspective somewhat by cropping off some foreground and allowing your model to fill more frame something like this:

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    Nice shot....yes IMO a crop could improve the image. Additionally I added a silver reflector effect originating from the right-hand side. This justifies the harder wall shadows. Reasons for crop might be wrinkled sheet and awkward left hand are minor distractions. Tonality and expression are perfect. Well done.

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    Great shot. How do you feel about this? I find the elbow joint very distracting.....do you think it can be de-emphasized somehow. I tried blur here:

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    old books 1

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    Hi Kelly, I played with the crop, tonality and lighting just a bit. IMO this gives a static image alittle more interest and drama. Do you like the re-worked version?

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