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laceyhughes

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    Lady Bug

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    Great colors and lighting. I think I would crop just a little more off the left and right edges to take away some of the void. Just my opinion though. Very well done.

    Reef Quilt

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    Great color and contrast. The only suggestion is that I would have left a little more room at the top of the frame. As is, the rocks feel almost cut off. Same with the rock on the right, just a little more room at the edge. Keep up the great work!!

    Peaceful valley

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    Very serene. I would crop out the tree on the right. It's a bit distracting for me. The only other suggestion I would have would be to try and keep a little more detail in the cross. Nicely done.

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    Untitled

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    Beautiful water!! First thing I notice is the unlevel horizon. Pretty distracting. Next I would decide where you want the focal point, is it the sea or the sandy foreground? A good crop will help draw the eye to where you want you emphasis to be.

    (I edited your photo to help give an idea of what I'm talking about, hope you don't mind)

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  1. Very nice!! The foreground is a little too dark (for my taste). I would try to lighten it up just a little. A little trick I've learned to do for something like this is to take 2 photos (on a tripod). One exposure for the background, and one exposure for the foreground. Then merge the two together. It's sometimes hard to duplicate on film what our eyes see.

    Beautiful scenery.

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  2. Beautiful scenery!! I like the B&W. The color version is nice also, but this one really helps bring out the contrasting snow and mountian. I don't like the brush in the lower left corner. It feels distracting. I would clone it out. You don't want to crop out the foreground or it will leave the photo unbalanced. I would also lighten the brush on the right just a little to bring out a little more detail, so it doesn't feel like a heavy void.

    (I edited your photo just a little to give you an idea of what I'm trying to explain. Hope you don't mind)

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    Untitled

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    I love Yellowstone!! My favorite photos growing up were my Dad's (who I stole I OM1 from) taken at Yellowstone. There was one of a moose standing in a creek, and one of the hot sping "Morning Glory". Those images are permanently burned into my skull, and are probably some of the reasons why I like photography today. I too need to return to Yellowstone someday soon...
  3. Beautiful scenery!!

    The photo feels a little too over-processed to me. Your bright vivid colors are great, but I think the river might me a little too much. The shade through the middle doesn't match the shade around the banks. And just to the left of the rock in the foreground is distracting to me.

    Great photo, keep it up!!

     

     

    I played with the colors of your photo a little just to give you an idea of what's in my head... Hope you don't mind.

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