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altough the lighting is too hard in itself it's a nice image. However it's also a little obvious. There are thousands of these shots around and if you want a winner you have to make a perfect one. I'm very sorry, but here you haven't. Don't let that put you of tough. -
It's a great shot, no doubt about it. However, the b&w is lacking in contrast and far too greyed out. Leaving the warden his coloured vest is a mistake I think because it draws far too much attention. -
Kamil, I like it. It's a shot with great potential. You should get rid of the blue line in the upper right corner and the two spots on the lower left however. Also I think you could push the contrast some more. All in all a good one tough. -
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Nice job Oscar. It's a very graphic image of an otherwise normal scene. Good job altough I wonder if it would't be even better if you push the contrast some more? -
Pim, I definitely want to see the next one a month from now.
(hoofdvplk endoscopie afdeling)
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it is and because of that there are a lot of great images around. I have to say tough that this is one of the best I've seen in a long time. Good job.
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Dear Pim, you don't always have to have a striking sky to get a striking image. Unfortunately here you could have used it as you obviously know. Having said that I feel that you would have gotten a better image if you had gone down on your knee because there is a great fence which you could have used to your advantage, i.e. more than you did here. So you've got at least one reason to go back there.
By the way, succes met je studie vanuit het azM.
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I very much like the mood (I think) you are trying to convey here. DOP is just about right. But I also think it's a shame you did't take a step to the right because then the bleak sky which is over her head wouldn't draw so much attention. All in all tough it's a good and striking portrait.
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Hello John, this obviously was taken at the wrong time of day and I'm sure you are aware of that. The light is not what you look for if trying to make a photo of such a subject. You can do way better then this. -
looks like a Minor White revisited. Like the cutoff at the top too. Good one. -
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you took a very good picture here. Good composition. I think the desaturated colorscheme adds to the mood you're trying to convey. The flowers however seem a bit chunky altough there is not much you can do about that. Just left of the middle above the crosses ther is a little bright spot that draws a little too much attention and you should clone that out. Good image.
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Yep, for sure it's a nice urban landscape with some beautiful evening light. However, your image is tilted. Just put a little more effort into it and straighten it.
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Nice colors and framing. Shame tough that the "out of focus" effect doesn't work at all, for me that is. I think you should lose it. Blurring the background somewhat would be fine, but I think you could improve the image by showing your subject in this picture with all its details.
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niet veel keus dus. Mogelijk scherpte/diepte wat minder. Het moment van opname kan echter nauwelijks beter -
prachtfoto, mooi afgewerkt. Goede uitsnede gekozen. Helaas niet perfect omdat het licht niet optimaal zit, maar daar kun je ook niet altijd wat aan verhelpen. -
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