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tonmestrom

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    Untitled

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    I agree with Jason except for one thing. You've got to bring that sepia colouring down, speaking of which, why colour it at all? Groeten, Ton

    Untitled

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    it's a very good portrait iwth excellent lighting and great tonality. Having said that, I think it needs a bit of colourcorrecting behind her head. Great one tough. Groeten, Ton

    pankake

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    you've put me off for quite while. But seriously, altough I'm not into this kind of photography myself I think it's a great image. You've worked out wonderfully an idea and made something special of it. Great editing too.

    Untitled

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    Bob I like this kind of photography. You've got two great characters here. I don't mind that much about your background, you know yourself that that could have been better (altough it hasn't to be perfect for me). However, I do think that this photo lacks something important. I would like to have seen a bit more of their eyes or they should have put some sunglasses on. As it is it could have ben a lot better. Regards

    Untitled

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    By no means do I want to wrub it in but John is absolutely right. Also your lighting is far from perfect. Sorry about that, but I wrote it for the same reason. Would also like to see another go at it. With kind regards, Ton.

    The believers

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    it's a great photo for all the above mentioned reasons. But I really have been in doubt whether I really mind that it is slightly out of focus and the answer is no, I don't mind that much (I even surprised myself there). But looking at it for that long drew my attention more and more to the right pillar and You should darken that down for two reasons: it will draw less unwanted attention and it will create more depth.

    Kado and the Bone

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    Like you said, just a bit of fun,no harm in that. I think however that you know to well how much this is over the top. I've got doggies too and know all the temptations (I succeeded so far in resisting them) of doing just what you did. Bottomline is you've got one great portrait of your dog so get rid of that ugly, screen exploding yellow and show us the real one. Great image, great dog.

     

    Untitled

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    as a Paris fan I know that it takes a lot of creativity to find an original angle on all those touristic highlights, but here that's just what you succesfully did. It's a great composition. However, I think if you would improve the contrast it would be even better because now it's a little too grey for my taste. Wouldn't have minded tough to have made it myself.

    DARK TIMES

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    I'm not into ropes or hoses and to be quite frank I don't really care. What I do care about is that this is one great image. However, dark times or not, I'm not too fond of that greyed out snow. Altough it's quite possible that it's just like you have seen it, I think your image would improve if you increased the contrast a little.
  1. in more ways then one this is a very interesting photo. It lacks focus and contrast and is tilted to the right. If this is one of your favourites I really can't understand why you don't put some extra work in it because in a way you're right, it's all there. It's your picture tough which means you have to decide and as a general rule I'm not one to alter someone else's photo's. But in this case I just can't help myself and want to offer some humble advice: Correct the perspective, crop out the top beam, convert it to mono and push the contrast. In that case the lack of focus could even add to the mood. Now, I've said it. Hope you don't bite my head off (my wife would't appreciate that).

    'N' (III)

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    I think it's a very good portrait. However I think that it would benefit from a little more contrast. The eyes could use some work also. But it's all there. Good one.

    Untitled

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    I like the dark tones here which really add atmosphere. Nice diagonal composition too. It feels a bit tilted however. Very good image.
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