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  1. Ryan, If it were me I think I'd crop a good majority of the right side off (to about the middle of the small tree), a little off the left side and top. If possible I'd clone out the graffiti on the rock. Your subject is well lit but her face is shadowed. So a slight turn in her pose would have illuminated her face better. Just my two cents worth. :)

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    Well, it has a pretty good tonal range. Focus, might be a bit soft. But, to me, there really isn't one particular thing (such as the tomestones) that is clearly the subject. I think a different perspective here would be better, keying in on a particular subject. Hope that helps. :)
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