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daved1

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  1. John, by using the equipment you speak of I believe you are close to getting the result you seek. As for the composition I think a crop just outside the man on the left would present this scene better. I believe the four gentlemen are your subject here.
  2. The lines flow well in this shot. Nice perspective that shows enough of the cross and that wonderful sky. Would it be better if you cloned out that broken tree and tree top? I think it would lend more impact and flow to the front of the building if they were not there. This one I really like Lou Ann.
  3. Very nice shot. The correction Hans may be speaking of is the right tilting of the front of the building(?). If it where more straight up and down it would reflect a truer reproduction of this scene. It is a lovely shot but that is one thing that caught my eye immediately.
  4. This slight crop does a better job (for me) holding my attention when my eye reaches the chair on the left extreme. When I glance at this photo my eye is first drawn to the window (almost dead center), then wanders to the right and down, then up the path and to the left. It is only a slight crop difference but holds my eye in the frame better.

    I wish you would have received more critiques, as I am no expert. Maybe repost it with the explanation of 'recropped' and see if anyone comments.

    Take Care :)

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