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danbliss

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    I like the texture and the composition. It is very nice detail. I wonder if the contrast is a tiny bit high, or something. I feel like we are missing just a bit of the detail on the wonderful texture. In any case, I like it.

     

    Dan

  1. I like the photo. I like the simplicity, and the sense of humor. I do think that there is noticeable burn around the tractor. I think the picture would be strong with a slightly subtler touch. In any case, it is a really enjoyable photo.

     

    Dan

    Untitled

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    I very much like the simplicity of the photo. Nicely down. However... I wonder if the size of your name in the frame might detract from the photo. In a busy photo I might not think much of it, but in this quiet minimalist photo, the name draws attention. Just my thoughts... nicely done.

     

    Dan

  2. Ok. I admit it. I hope this doesn't get me into trouble, but I don't really like animal/bird photos. I like animals. Heck, I am vegetarian for that reason, but I usually don't appreciate the photos. HOWEVER, this photo is different. I like the color, the geometry. It is slightly abstract. It is really wonderful. Well done.

     

    Dan

    Untitled

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    Well... I like at some of your other photos of this model and it looks like you are using a soft box... so I don't know. Anyway, great shot.

     

    Dan

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    Wonderful model and a wonderful pose... I have a couple of minor suggestions which might or might not help. It might be nice to make more use of the horizontal space. The photo feels a bit tall and thin. Second, I think a larger light source might help, maybe a soft box, umbrella, or larger window. The light on her face seems just a little harsh. It is a wonderful start. Anyway, you really just need to listen to your own intuition. Oh, I like that fact that it is a little dark.

     

    Dan

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    I saw you had this both as B&W and color. I think the B&W is much stronger. I like it. I was trying to decide if I'd like it more with more burn on the clouds, but maybe not. Anyway, it is nice how the fence frames the person out on the beach. Nice.

    Dan

    The Pier

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    I like the punch of color both in the building and the chain reel. It plays well with the muted tones of the sand, sea, and sky. I also like the interplay of the the four lines, chain, shore, horizon, and pier. Nicely done.

     

    I am curious what lens you used.

     

    Dan

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    I like the tonal range and the idea. It would have been cool if you could have got the old truck in the foreground, but I am guessing that you couldn't.

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    I very much enjoy the painterly feel of this work. I am drawn to the lonely feeling it evokes. The structure of the trees fading into the distance is great. It is wonderful.

     

    Thanks,

    Dan

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