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  1. Pierre and Jim, thanks very much for your kind words. I struggled with the composition on this one... it was difficult finding a part of the foreground shoreline to provide some lead in lines. The spot I chose was the only area on this side of the lake that wasn't parallel to the far side. I'm glad it seems to have worked. Cheers, Scott.

    Niko feeling frisky

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    Nicely done Jim! Very dramatic! That's a tough shot to get, especially with a shallow depth of field as you've done here. Well done!

    I'd probably crop the left side of the frame to remove most of the black dog that's touching the bottom of the frame. I'd probably also crop the gap between the white dog and the right side of the frame, just to make him feel more penned in, with nowhere to run. You could also try sharpening the fur on the white dog just to punch up how mad he is. These are just some ideas for experimentation... you decide if you think they're an improvement or not.

    Great shot!

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    Beautiful image, beautiful model! A very relaxed pose, and excellent use of colour and lighting. I think the only change I would make would be to desaturate the pastry on the table. The rest of the table items are quite monochrome, but the pastry is a bit distracting. Regardless, stunning work! Superb!

  2. I love this image! The darkness at the lower part of the frame adds a lot of mystery to the image, and the overall monochrome tone makes it very surreal. I think this works very well just as it is. As an experiment, I tried a narrower crop, but I'm torn as to whether or not it's an improvement. Well done!

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  3. Hey Ellery. Thanks for your comment on your pileated woodpecker. I thought I'd return the favour by commenting on your fine portrait here. I too am just getting started in portraiture (as evidenced by a complete lack of them in my portfolio), so I'm very familiar with trying to light these poses with no real lights. From a lighting standpoint, I think you've done really well here. You've got no strong shadows on the face, and nice catchlights in the eyes. A bit more light on the back of her head, just to help separate her from the background might be an improvement, but a minor one. The pose is a little awkward, which always adds a bit of an uneasy feeling to a portrait, but in my mind that's a minor quip. From an editing standpoint, I might brighten up the sweater a bit, just to ensure there's a bit of detail across its entire surface, and I might punch up the eye catchlights a bit, but that'd be it. Overall, I think you've done very well here... one worth framing for sure!
  4. Thanks for all your kind comments everyone! Mark... you may be right... I'm not sure. The way the sun was catching the top of the grasses was stunningly bright and golden... it was a challenge to try and reproduce that in post. I'll play around with it some more and see if I can back it off a bit. Thanks again!

    Storm Rolls In

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    Beautiful shot! I'd probably crop a bit off the bottom... if you drew the biggest rectangle that held only black pixels, I'd probably remove the bottom 3/4 of it. You still want continuous black across the bottom. I think that's mostly a matter of personal taste though. Cheers, Scott
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