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geof finch

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  1. I like the subdued colour - it's a nice effect. I also like the lines of the waves, and it's a great pose. The only thing that detracts is her hair at her right armpit - it's slightly darker and slightly sticks out past her body. As a viewer, my eyes seem to stop just at that point from flowing around her whole body. It's only a minor thing. Well done.

    Rena

          3
    I like the hand and I like the simple pose. But the pubic area catches my attention because it appears to be blurred, and the lines across the body in this area tend to distract me. Apart from that I do like the image

    *

          5
    I like the pose and negative background. But the skin area on the models left thigh distracts me because of the harsh lighting. I realise your intention - you want this 'plastic' wet 'titan' look, but the effect leaves her thigh looking as though something is wrong with it. Apart from that, it's a great eye catching image.

    Untitled

          4
    A simple image that works well. I like the background colour - the models shape stands out really good, and I like the tone and form. Nice pose. Very eye catching.

    Untitled

          4
    I agree with Ivan (but good DOF or portrait lens can address this) - I do like the pose and I like the way the neck is cut off so abrupt which is unusual but effective in presenting the shoulders, arms and torso as a kind of statement. Nice light. Well done
  2. I like the title - my first impression (before reading the title) is that it's a 'dreamy' image. Love the feet and legs and overall skin tone. A nice soft image. Good background that doesn't distract. The finger points me to the morning light but the lines in the curtain draws me back to the subject again. I also like the chair as a frame for the subject. Well done.

    Stationary time

          50
    A really beautiful image. I think the star burst can either be left in or taken out - it doesn't really matter. Personally I would take it out because it just grabs my attention for a little bit too long and creates an 'unatural' feel to the image. On the other hand it makes it a rather interesting effect, especially the way it lights the end of the boat / canoe ? So, it depends on the effect that you (as an artist) are trying to present to me (the viewer). I like the overall colour and I love the mood.
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