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emre

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  1. The font is inappropriate; too light for such a somber picture. I do not know what you did about sharpening; the grass is mushy and there is a halo surrounding the trees.

     

    This is my brutally honest critique; ignore at pleasure!

    Normally!

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    I imagine this is a picture of a young woman who is making last-minute adjustments to her appearance before greeting her boyfriend, on the motorcycle (situated out of the frame, to heighten the tension.)

     

    I like the pose, background, and what you did with the Liquify filter, but the distribution of light irks me. I get attracted to the top left and get stuck there, as it were. Nit-picking for what amounts to a great photograph; do not be offended.

  2. Beside the obvious grunge look, I rather like the curved windows. With so many naturally straight lines, it must have been tempting to correct the barrel distortion. Fortunately you did not.

    Aquarius

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    Fits in with your other works... I humbly suggest trying to achieve more realistic light. I know the whole thing is synthetic (obviously!) but that does not mean it can not have a realistic guise.
  3. It looks merely out of focus to my untrained eyes.

     

    Edit: No, I take it back; I was looking at the reduced-size sample. Now I rather like it. My only nitpick is that her right arm is blended into her torso due to the lighting arrangement.

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