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Anthony, thank you very much for your edited photo, I have received it already.

I have posted another photo for critique, please have a look when you have time.

Cheers

http://www.photo.net/photodb/photo?photo_id=4892670

Helo~

I am a beginner of photography, and a new member here. Please give me

critiques and comments, and help me to improve. Thanks.

I used exposure compensation = -0.7 step, to make it more moody and

saturated. No PS*

I like this photo.

Comfortable and freshy colour, excellent DOF.

Nice dynamic range.

Very nice shot.

Good DOF, and peaceful colour composition.

Congratulations

Excellent colour composition, framing and exposure.

I like this photo. Congratulations

nice capture

the flowers immediately catch my eyes once I see the photo.

Congratulations

It's a nice trial anyway.

I like the concept and atmosphere of your photo

I am just trying to suggest some aspects, such as framing and focuing, to further improve the photo.

You are welcome. Lets learn and improve together.

Come to my porfolio and leave some comments when you have time

I am interested most in capturing portrait, environmental portraiture and birds or other peaceful animal in general.

^^

Cheers

Thank you very much for your comments.

PN is really a nice place for me to learn.

For this photo, I deliberately set the white balance to be warmer than normal, as I am trying to create a warm tonation, a feeling of Renaissance oil painting, in which only warm colour like red, brown and yellow are used.

Anthony, your PS edited photo is nice, but of a different feeling. I like the glowing feeling of the dress. Did you edit the preview size or the original size of the photo? If you have edited the large size of this photo, would you mind sending me through my email (<10Mb per email is ok)? Thank you very much.

^^

Thank you once again for your comments Kellen and Anthony.

Lets keep shooting and improving.

Check out my porfolio regularly.

Cheers~

^^

nice DOF and colour composition.

However, I am fail to locate any place for my major attention, and my eyes just looking around for a number of times.

nice framing.

But I think it's a bit over-exposed, such that the colour and structure of the flower is whitened and less well contrasted resp.

Interesting shot.

It may even be better if can zoom in a little bit more, such that both the bee and flower (2 main objects) are enlarged, with the decrease in margin dimension.

fantastic colour tone, nice DOF

wonderful framing

Interesting and sharp ship

Really nice, I love your photo. Congratulations

^^

Nice colour composition.

However, the golden yellow flowers (?) on the right distract my attention from the eyes on the left.

nice DOF, interesting lighting - the lighter trees and foreground make me focus on the well contrast wheel, followed by the house, even if it is dark.

A nice shot ^^

Lovely little girl

But I think you may try to pan down more to get a better framing: more interesting face and less boring hair

Over-exposed sky dominates the background. May consider using a polarizer or filter.

The statue on the right add some distraction to audience's attention.

Unsatisfactory framing.

The photo was taken behind glass, using flash?

Poor colour quality and resolution.

Lack of main attraction, and the overexposed reflection of the flash seriously distract audience's attention.

Nice shot.

However, it seems that the focus is a little bit inaccurate.

A nice photo, nice framing, nice colour, sharp image

Congratulations

Only fair framing.

I suggest you may either zoom in more for the face to fill up the photo, or you may try to pan the camera towards the left to include a larger area of the man and to create more space the man's sight, which is directing towards the left hand side.

Too busy background. May use a longer focal length lens, like 120mm or longer.

Very nice colour tone and composition

Very nice framing

The scene creates a feeling of peace and harmony, especially with the dome architecture, wrt to needle-like tower.

Major attraction is the golden colour on both the dome and its reflection.

I like the photo~ Congratulations~

The framing is quite nice

However, it seems that the image is blurred, what's the shutter speed u used?

Also the colour noise is quite large, are you using high ISO?

For the theme of this photo, the feeling of begger is not obvious to me, as the lady was carrying a fine bag (at least an intact and not undirty one)...

Helo~

I am a beginner of photography, and a new member here.

Please give me critiques and comments, and help me to improve.

Thanks

I used exposure compensation = -0.7 step, to make it more moody and

saturated.

No PS*