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    Not only does it stand out as Arthur observed, but it does it in a way that suits the subject: well done!
    (however, it could have been sharper)


    Out of curiosity, is this a single- or multiple-frame HDR? 

    Also, did you do it in PhotoMatix or some other software?

    /\/\

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    (in terms of 'how to make it better' critique, not particularly fond of the shadows behind the model -- I would have seated her farther away from the background -- but they aren't a deal-breaker)

  1. It's a matter of taste and I often find myself torn apart between lightening up shadows in order to show more detail, and keeping them dark and more "moody."  Here my impression is that there is an insufficient contrast between light and dark areas, which makes it look unnatural: one would expect greater dynamic range (the impression is stronger when viewed Large).

    Other than that, well done!

  2. Larry Greenbaum wrote:

    Is there a way that you can achieve more tonal or zone values here - more different shades of gray ranging from white to black?  I find that the sliders in the saturation panel (check black and white conversion) in Camera Raw work quite well for adding tonal range.

    @ Larry: do you mean the 'HSL / Grayscale' panel with the "Convert to Grayscale" checkbox ticked?

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    Piccoli segreti

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    Love the feel of this photo, the warm glow of reflected sunlight, the arch framing the composition (although Rashed S may have a point -- like his cropped version too!), and its rich tonal range. The only technical problem I see is over-sharpening, which is very pronounced when viewed Large.

  3. Robert Charity wrote:

    I get feeling from the flat roof, that the image is not level - Not sure whether this is real or an illusion on my part, but is disturbs me a little.

    If you took the image at a little higher angle you would get more of the interesting sky and less of the not-so-interesting foreground building. Just a thought.

    Once you brought my attention to it, Robert, I too had the impression that the building is "falling" to the right, but then I checked the lines that are supposed to be vertical and they all are just so, so reckon the slanting roof is the result of perspective distortion (Eugenio's camera wasn't parallel to the plain of the building -- the lens must have been pointing at an angle closer to 45 than to 90 degrees.) 

    As for the buildings in the foreground, I actually like them more than the sky; I see them as essential for environmental context, underscoring the grandiose domination of the cathedral.  The sky provides the final touch, but there's just enough of it.

  4. While completely different in general, this picture of yours reminds me one of mine.  Think it's not just that both our models have their arms raised as if crucified and seem to be in some sort of a trans, but also the rye somehow is reminiscent of my zoom blur effect :)

  5. Correct, the adjustments are of the fine-tuning magnitude -- there was simply very little room left to improve on -- so the best way to notice the differences is to look at both side by side and focus on / compare only one element at the time (not to mention that monitor calibration may make them even more difficult to spot).

    Sarah

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    Starvy Goodfellows wrote:

    The background is too prominent.

    The table is an issue but so because the model is not quite occupying the centre of the frame.

    I second Starvy on the background (so have blurred it), but model's placement as well as the table work for me fine (except the non-reflection as marked on my edit in red ;)

    Also have boosted contrast (both local and mid-tone), but only on the model.

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    Sarah !!

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    My vote goes to the B&W version (perhaps too bright in places, but didn't want to spend ages masking)

    Btw, which background is real? -- I'd guess this one -- the "wallpaper" looks very natural / believable, including its reflection on the table's top, which actually defies the laws of optics ;)

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