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jasonsmith894

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  1. Went out to capture the sunrise yesterday, but was met with low lying

    clouds and very little color in the sky. I did manage to capture a few

    images for conversion to B&W, such as this one. Anyway, appreciate

    your feedback on this image.

  2. David -- First, very nice image.  I like the depth of field chosen, as it presents the subject matter in much more original way.  Second, I agree with some of the other comments that the cropped version is a bit stronger.  I like both, but I think cropping out the sky does present a stronger composition and focus on the subject of the image.  Finally, I love the light and the way you captured it on the brush in the foreground.  All in all, a very nice image.

    Moon and Piers

          5

    I intended to convert this image to B&W, but starting playing around

    with toning while editing. I'm not sure how I feel about the image,

    though I do like the dreamy feeling it has. If anyone has any

    comments or feedback about the effect, I would definitely appreciate

    them.

    Drifting

          4

    Beautiful image.  The B&W conversion is fabulous too.  My only suggestion is that you might crop a bitter off the right as it would direct the eye into the image.  Regardless, the image is very nice.

  3. I think it's a good image.  The composition is nice.  The only struggle with these types of images is that it's impossible to expose for the foreground and hold detail in the moon.  You either have to double expose or take a separate frame for the moon and blend it in.  Anyway, I like the image.

    Nearly Full

          13

    Thanks to all for the comments.  I did take a separate image of the moon to retain detail, but I replaced it as it appeared in the original image (i.e., in the same location).  I did, however, use a longer focal length for the moon image, which explains why it is exaggerated.  I understand why the foreground and pier to the left over complicates the image.  I like the foreground elements, but may try to simplify the image.  I will repost after I re-work the image.  Thank you again to all who provided feedback.  The comments helped me see the image difderently.  

    Still

          4

    Thank you both for the helpful feedback.  I was thinking about a square crop for this image, but hadn't thought about extending the foreground.

    Untitled

          5

    I agree with the other comments.  The only thing I might change is the location of the light house.  It is very central in the image.  Beat regards.

    Pink Sunset

          7

    I enhanced the color in the sky, but may have over done it.

    I would appreciate any feedback on that or any other

    components if the shot. As always, your comments and

    feedback are most appreciated.

  4. Interesting image.  It might be better if you could pull a bit more detail out of the land elements, as they have gone completely black.  I think this might help to anchor the image.  Also, it appears that you have big dust spot in the middle of the cloud.  This is easily correctiable using content aware fill in PS.

    Nearly Full

          13

    Went out to take sunset photos last night, and was met with a

    cloudless sky. There was some color near the horizon after the sun

    was mostly down, which I was able to capture. Any

    comments/critiques would be most appreciated.

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