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Long exposure image taken during a recent morning shoot. Converted

to B&W in PS. Comments are most appreciated. Hope everyone is

having a good weekend.

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...with great clouds and a simple but powerful composition.

Photographers will wonder why you chose such a direct composition instead of moving to one side to create a leading line perspective of the wooden piers. However, what you've done is different and, in many ways, stronger.

You should consider toning down the brighter top area of clouds along the top middle; the eye is unnecessarily drawn there, exiting the photograph, rather than being subtly redirected back in by a lower tonal value.

Also, consider raising the values of the water to make it more silvery.

Great photograph for the wall. Congratulations!

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It is a symmetrical composition, almost fully, but,  this time it is excellent and perfectly done. Fortunately  the  sky, clouds  not  washed a way  and that is  one of the  subject in the image  what  making this a great shoot. For suggestion to improv on the all ready  great image, I would, IMHO, extended  the  lover  part a little  to  dramatize  the  composition  even  better. I like the  image very much. You  where  so  lucky  with the sky. (7).  The  B&W  processing is  great too.

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Thank you both for the helpful feedback.  I was thinking about a square crop for this image, but hadn't thought about extending the foreground.

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