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susanolson

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    Grass hands

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    This to me is a sexual image with out being so obvious. Because of that I like it and it interests me. Looking at your work I am not sure if that is what you were going for. I guess I am a pervert and maybe see things in a way they were not intended to be. Shucks. Good job though stepping out of your box.

    Crystal 2

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    Love the color. Love the skin tones and lighting. A flattering photo. The only thing that catches my eye is where the fabric isn't in the fram....upper left. Other than that nice work!!

    Untitled

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    I know the importance of this story and I think it looks better in B&W. The colors are just not right. Keep your photo faucet pouring. haha

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    30 weeks

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    Nice pretty woman with nice lighting. I am sure she will love it. But to me this is a common "safe" shot and so many photogs do this. There's gotta be a way to spice things up. The negative space on the right doesn't work for me. Keep shooting. Cheers!

    Untitled

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    I give you props that you've stepped out of your element.!!! It keeps you expanding. I like the way the light hits the satin background. Velvet also works well with light too by the way. I'm personally not that into shoes and but would like to see what this expands into. Keep shooting!! Cheers!

    In Repose

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    I really like her facial and hand expressions. I like that you tried something different with her pose but something about the way she looks waist down bothers me. It's not feminine. It doesn't quite go with how feminine she looks from the waist up. Maybe having her put some of her weight on her hip might give her some more curves. I don't know how I feel quite yet about her feet being cropped. I know it's mundane to be critical of little things like that. I hope it helps a little. Cheers!

    Scarred for Life

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    Maybe if you simplified the background a little bit it would help. Perhaps different lighting to exaggerate the scar....um like nasty flourescent lighting. I still think you should dig deeper emotionally with this one. I think many people will find similarities in your story. Especially in today's world where beauty and thin are so pounded into young females heads. Maybe Black and white would help and take out some color distractions from the subject...your scar...your story. Cheers! Hope it helps! I really think you should document this and maybe include some "during" shots as well if you have them.

    Scarred for Life

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    Without looking at your caption, my first thought is that this is an image of a sexy woman. I don't think you were successful at telling your story with this image. Just glancing at the image, I don't even see your scar from surgery and if I did I might think it was from a C-section. I think you should keep trying with this story........its a great subject. Dig deeper and you'll get it. The good news is that you got a sexy self portrait. Keep shooting! Cheers! And congrats on losing 200 lbs!!!

    Pandino

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    This is sexy without being overtly done. I really like the composition and lighting. Exposure is good and good job working with your subject. I don't know if the smoothing worked though (Median? Noise Ninja?) . I would like him a little more "raw". This is the kind of guy that looks hot rugged. Nice work!
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