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arash khoshghadam

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  1. this shot is a beauty. the inclusion of a focal point on the golden point of the composition and the balancing point's being framed by the tree on the left is visually effective. there are marks in the sand in the foreground leads the eyes into the frame. if I want to put my finger on anything, I think it is the total overexposure on the right. that area has effectively blocked the color cast. this image is a contra light situation which requires the use of ND filter or the alternative digital ND filter blending in Photoshop. the right tools for the right job.

    Lost Cabin

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    Hi, I think you have gone over the edge, ken sorry to say this but the cabin as one of the comment says is a little bit unnatural. I don't know what you have done but I think it is too sharp. the natural look is no longer there.

    "Light's Eye"

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    I think the vertical frame suits this shot. the composition is really alright and the light is well metered and control. shooting into the sun is something that can fool the light metering system of a lot of cameras. bravo.

    Untitled

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    I like the B&W and the angle. nice close-up. the lighting is appropriate and the exposure is fine. the background is nicely blurred.

    Untitled

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    I like the framing and the composition. the way the ripples on sand lead the way into the frame is really nice. lighting control is superb of course with a downside. you have lost some details in the shadows. you could take two shots with one metered on the sky and the other on the sand dune. then you could combine them in photoshop to bring the details in the shadow.

    Untitled

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    wow. nice angle of view and composition. you have managed to capture both beauty in the sky and the ripples on water where I think the light has played a significant role.

    Untitled

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    the composition using the silhouetted rock and the graceful sky is really great. the problem I have is with the post processing. the colors are too saturated and a little eye sore.
  2. very good capture. you have succeeded in capturing the grace of sunset and the light on the walls inside the underneath of the bridge. the presence of the guy there provides the shot with a focal point and a balance
  3. a good example of landscape abstraction. you could also compose the image using some other elements to embrace the incredible sky in perspective with other elements to create a representational landscape image.

    Untitled

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    I like your image for its colors and the overpowering presence of some elements such as the stones although you have lost some details in the shadows there. the slow shutter speed has also caused some motion blur in the meadow. I have a problem with the title of the image which is really sensitive part of any image. what your image is showing me is some plants and a couple of rocks. the light house is so barely invisible that the title is rejected once it is seen by the viewer. I mean what I expect here is at least a focal point ( a major representation of a light house).
  4. the reflection and the amount of details both in the shadows and in the highlights plus the nice reflection all have contributed to a good image plus one exception there is no focal point as primary point (balance) for the eyes to get anchored to.

    Moon landscape

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    the post processing in my opinion is too heavy in this image. the sky specially has some odd colors and some colors on land are oversaturated. heavy noise is also visible in the sky. you could use software such as Noise Ninja to effectively deal with the noise
  5. I think you have captured a nice perspective. what ails me here are two things. first of all, the light is not proper for landscape shot with heavy shade on one side and light on the other. another point is the question of post-process. some colors are over-saturated. the sky and the canyon ridge shows some odd colors. the tree on the right edge is also distracting.

    Alstrom Point

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    the composition is all right. I like the framing and the colors which embrace complementary color scheme. the only problem is the oversaturation of colors in the clouds. I think it is somehow too heavy. this image is also a good candidate for the black and white image

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    Snow Benches

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    what are the yellow,green, and the magenta colors in your shot? the black and white is really striking and the angle of view and the composition of elements work just fine.
  6. I don't know why the sky is pixelized or at least that is what I think. there is a fair amount of white clipping ( overexposure ) in the clouds. you could meter the light in the clouds and the land separately and combine them in photoshop or use an ND grad filter to avoid overexposure. the composition is all right and the water reflection is a nice touch in this shot.

    Untitled

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    the winter atmosphere you have captured is swell. I like the B&W effect. the pile of snow in the foreground adds dimension to the total response and gives your title justification.

    Afternoon storm

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    simple and effective. I like the tone in the clouds and the atmosphere you have captured. the exposure is really nice here. the amount of land framed is also swell. well done

    DAKHME # 2

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    there are two issues that should be addressed. first of all, is your intention. the shot has obviously captured the graveyards all right (focal point) but what doesn't belong here is the brick wall which does not add weight to the focal point. there is some sort of uncooperativeness observed in relation of the brick wall and the other elements. another gripe is the light. the graveyards given the first condition we talked about could be shot in a more striking light (early in the morning or late in the afternoon).it is just another element added to the existing elements to blend into one striking shot.
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