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    Pink Rose

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    Vincen, I think the image would be improved by some post processing adjustments to contrast, saturation and exposure. On my monitor it seems rather washed out.
  1. Very nice composition Sam, You might consider a small crop on the right to remove the bright lights at the end of the bridge in the foreground. To me they are a little distracting.

    Untitled

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    Daniel, It is especially important on an image like this that it be tack sharp and that the DOF be such that at least the entire "face" be in focus. It is an interesting creature and to have what appears to be its tongue sticking out is again unique to go along with your point of view. It just needs to be sharper.

    6186

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    Excellent.  Not much more to say.  It is a very interesting image with the warm sunlight and green against the very cold blue of the water and ice, quite a paradox.

  2. Hello Robert, IMHO without a focal point the lines created by the branches are just that, lines.  Some of the lines do make interesting objects, like the girl/young lady that appears to be flying through the image or leaning out off of the bow of the Titanic like Kate Winslett in the movie.  I hope you do not mind but I made a copy of your image and darkened the area I am talking about because it would have been too hard to describe.  Maybe if there was a way to more subtly draw attention to that area you would have a little something more out of this image.

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    Butterfly2

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    Nice image Etienne.  I believe that the left side of your image needs to be cropped to remove the buds (and the stem) that are cut off on that side as I find them distracting from your image.  Exposure looks good as you maintained good detail in the white wings although a little selective brightening of the flower and the other buds would not hurt.

    Untitled

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    Nice Shot Lev.  You might want to do a search of internet videos "Stand by me playing for change".  I think you will find this gentleman in the video.  If it is not him the video is worth watching as it is an excellent editing job as singers from around the world are blended into a single video, hard to describe you will see when you watch it.

    gorga

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    Hello Shane, I like the image and the expression, or lack there of, on your models face. I would like to see her right eye just a little bit more, on my monitor I think it is just a little too dark.

    Frosted Rose

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    What do you think of this image, I can't seem to make up my mind, to

    me, there just seems to be something missing. Maybe it is the

    background which is almost pure white simply because we have quite a

    lot of snow here and that's about all you can see wherever you look.

    Thanks for looking and all critiques and comments are welcome and

    appreciated.

    Crazy flying

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    Hello Harry, I really love the color and texture of both the sky and smoke trail. Believe it or not I almost find the plane to be distracting, I guess because of its size within the image. I am not sure I know how I might crop the image to make the plane a little larger in the image but you could probably take a little from the right , top and bottom without negatively impacting the rest of the image. That would also move the plane out of dead center which I think might help the overall composition of the image.

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    Hello Kenneth, A couple of observations about this shot and why it really does not work for me. I believe that you needed to include the whole bottom of the tree in the foreground at the very least if not the whole tree. The background fences are also more of a distraction then a help. Maybe if you had taken a vertical approach to the scene it would have lessened the distracting background on the left and the tree would have felt more isolated. The colors are great, especially the red and orange against the blue sky.
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