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daverave

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    An image with potential but I think that I would try and make the water look whiter as it would in real life. You've probably overdone the Selective Color settings for the whites, which is a useful technique but needs to be subtler.

    Yellow At You

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    Finishing up some the last of work from autumn, before tackling a month of images from NZ.  This long exposure was taken on Cache Creek at the peak of fall colors with little bits of foam from the rapid beyond floating towards the camera.

  1. A very brooding image with wonderful atmospherics and an evocative backstory ;-) Love the mist!

    I didn't notice it until I opened up the larger version but there is a noticeable halo above the darkest mountain in the center... easily fixed before printing.

    Cyrstal Mill

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    Did you use all those filters at once? Great shot and composition, the mill really jumps out to me and there is a lot of detail in the shadow. I could see a crop just above the yellow tree to remove that foreground branch coming in from the left side although you would lose some of the dramatic sky.

    Autumn Creek

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    Very engaging image and well executed. I might have tried to get the entire beige leaf in at the bottom and maybe cropped out the black thing in the lower right corner.

    Untitled

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    Very nice image, Jason. I might have exactly centered that interface between the two rocks at the bottom. And maybe desaturated the yellow a touch on the horizon but otherwise a solid photograph, very dreamy.

    Racing the Sunset

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    Yep, this one, the rider is more prominent. It's great how much detail is there on her body too considering where the light source is.  I agree that cropping the yellow strip at top would be an improvement as everything else is in the orange-red-magenta range.

  2. Very nice, Robert.  Nice detail throughout even in the shadows. I'm with Stephen on wanting to see that whole tree. There's a bit of sensor dust just right of center in the sky, easily cloned away.

    Tower Bridge

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    Hey, that's my hometown!

    I like the compositional idea but not sure I like the obscured tower on the right.  The B+W treatment is nice, maybe a little soft on the focus.

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