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    Free E

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    I woulda tried to run the top edge parallel to the window top, but that's my compulsive nature. I think the composition here works really well, anyway. When you see colors like this comingling, you gotta play with it. Nice shot.

    Boy on Cold Beach

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    I am thinking a portrait orientation would be great, but then you're talking about an entirely separate photo. This shot is as much about the day (the beach, the weather) as the subject, and losing much on either side would make this more specifically about the kid.

    Boy on Cold Beach

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    It is the muted colors--and the boy's hidden hands--that go a long way towards conveying the chilliness of the day. I like how the shore seems to arc around behind the lad, bringing everything forward in the shot. Because I'm some sort of minimalist, I would have cropped out the greenery in the upper left, but seeing it here it helps establish the shot. Very nice.

    Untitled

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    I've looked at this about five times to decide whether I like it or not. I do think that this could be cropped from the bottom, as the out-of-focus overalls do nothing for the overall composition. I want to dislike the soft focus, but it seems to bring out the skin. I think you caught a great expression here.

    Kid Foot

          5
    Trying to decide if I want the foot in focus, or not. Kinda works either way. Kid's got beautiful eyes, and maybe that's the point. No matter how obnoxious they get, they're still kids--and this kid knows she's gonna be cut some slack.
  1. The color and composition here are great, so I am going to nit pick. This would actually look a lot more refreshing were it not a third empty and all the ice melted. Still, the sweat on the glass suggests it's still cold. I'm guessing you were goofing around and found you were on to something. Right?
  2. Hey, Grant Wood, I like this one a lot. Every color pops, yet nothing looks synthetic. I especially like the crop, as the large pumpkin on the lower right makes an excellent anchor. Nice job.

    Votives

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    I spent some time in a cathedral trying to get something good out of the votive rack, I got nothing. This is cool. I appreciate how much time you must have spent trying to nail the exposure on this one. Very cool.

    Sintra

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    The light was good when you took this shot. I am not sure that I would have left as much of the less interesting building at the bottom, though. Cool find.
  3. If you want to seriously highlight these bottles, you're going to want to find a suitable background. The screen/trees/black window frames are really distracting. Also, I think the bottles are far too close to each other. Play with them: try staggering them, or simple moving them further apart. Right now your eye can't follow the surface of the bottle very far before the next bottle draws you away. This looks like a cool project.

    THE RAPTURE

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    Horse pucky, indeed. David, I, too have a soft spot for the relics of misplaced optimism, and A find much of it in my collection of derelict signs.

     

    http://photo.net/photodb/folder?folder_id=457254

     

    Check'em out of you have the chance. While they aren't always especially artistically rewarding to photograph, they do all have a story, and are worth

    being captured.

     

    Anyway, I'm done. Keep shooting,

     

    -Tom

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