h._p.
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Nicely observed and well captured, in my opinion. I like the balance between the still corn at the back, the moving corn in the middle and the dark undergrowth at the front which gives a nice sense of depth. -
I think this is a better than average sunset. The composition is nicely balanced and the progression of trees from right to left works well. I also like the way the water has been bordered by the dark foreshore.
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Without meaning to be unkind, I think this is a nice record shot but rather boring. In my opinion, the good points are the inclusion of the window frame and the open window as framing elements. The tree and the horse are also nicely placed.
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I think it's a competent portrait but not especially arresting. Cutting off the top and side of her head is effective and the narrow depth of field concentrates attention on the features. I think that if you cropped away the bottom 15% of the picture to remove the distracting white it would be stronger.
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I rather like this. Unfortunately I think the line of sky at the top competes far too well with the movement of the grass and spoils the picture. With that cropped out, I think the picture comes into its own. -
In my opinion this is a nice snapshot. The use of a flash is rather obvious and spoils the picture. It makes me wonder how much irritation you caused by taking photographs. Composition is good with the pyramid shape nicely centred. -
I like the composition with the row of ducks receeding towards the right but I think you've spoiled it badly with the feathery excressence above the bill of the front duck. Being that this is digital, five minutes in Photoshop would have sorted that.
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I think I can see where you're heading with this one but I don't believe it works. The background to the left is too light and the musician is too dark so that my eye keeps wandering to the background. If you burnt in the background and brought up the musician then you might well have a nice image. -
I have to say that I think this is very strong indeed. As has been said, the star effect is very powerfull and positioning is excellent. -
As has been said, it looks too soft. Also, I think it would look much better with the skyline cropped out entirely. The spindly trees fight with the water for attention. -
Nicely done - the towel is perfectly placed in my opinion. I think it would be just that little bit stronger if you cropped it immediately below the windo sill to remove the blue pattern in the centre. -
I can't say I like that overall greyness and whether it is or isn't the fish looks out of focus to me. -
I'd think it would have been better if the singer were further to the right so that she was looking into rather than out of the picture. Also, I'm not at all sure about the strange flare like constructs all over the image. I find them very disconcerting.
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Very strange image. I'd have to give it high marks for originality. -
I think that the first thing about a flower picture is not to cut bits off it as you've done at the top. The second thing, in my opinion, is to get it pin sharp. Whether it's camera shake or a bad scan, this looks out of focus. Perhaps you should try again picking a different coloured flower, red tends to show up any flaws quite badly.
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Very nice technically and the composition is spot on. Pretty boring subject, though. -
I'm afraid I think there's far too much blur in this one for my taste. If the central couple were sharp it would be a different matter because the colour is very nice and the idea of capturing movement is a good one. -
It's a nice record shot, very competently done. You've got all the elements in the correct place, in my opinion. -
I have to say that I find it boring. It's well executed but rather sterile. -
My better nature tells me I should hate this one but I have to admit that I don't. It looks very like a '60s comic book illustration. Perhaps removing the 'stars' would be an improvement - they look like dust flecks to me.
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Very well composed shot, the will lit road and the darker masses are very nicely placed.
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Nice record shot, very competently done. I especially like the way the scene has so many little "sub" pictures in it like the cloths drying outside the windows.
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I have to say that this doesn't work for me. The hand looks like some alien object intruding into the picture. It might have worked better if the arm had come down from the top of the frame but...