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h._p.

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    Pretty Girl

          3
    It's a clever idea but I don't think you've pulled it off. The odd object intruding from the left and the vertical bar close to the centre as well as the slotted bar at the right are all rather distracting.

    Untitled

          9
    I think it's very nicely captured. You could mess around with the cropping for ages with something like this but I think you've found a nice balance.

    Untitled

          3
    I wouldn't fill in the shade at all, myself, I think it works very nicely as it is. Personally, I'd crop a little off the top to increase the bird's dominance. I'm not sure I like it as I 'know' owls have two eyes but it's certainly different.

    Skylake

          5
    I think I'd crop out the shoreline altogether and have just the grass at the top of the picture. I quite like the little bit of foliage at bottom right, it adds a little bit of depth.
  1. I think the tree and cloud is very effective. The only thing I'd question is the foliage on the left. I think you'd have been better without it or with a lot more of it, as it stands it's just an intrusion.

    Tepsicore

          6
    It's a very interesting image but I think it would have been better if the statue were a little further right and were somewhat larger.
  2. I think three things detract from this. The first is that it just doesn't look sharp. The second is that you've cut off the circumference too sharply and the third is the flag which competes too strongly with the rest of the elements. It's a good idea, though and I like the way you've placed the struts to lead the eye into the picture.

    leaf after rain

          3
    I think this is a nice idea and I like the composition with the diagonal lines but the depth of field is far to thin. I think the drops at the front need to be in focus for this to work well.

    Untitled

          3
    I have to say that this seems ugly and pointless to me. I don't like the splash of yellow at the top which just looks like an intrusion to me and the shape at the left really needs to be further right in my opinion.

    Contrast of Growth

          4
    I think that it's a nice idea but that you spoiled it by leaving in the background flower which breaks up the composition. You did get a nice diagonal patern going with the two front flowers. I think that if you cropped it just above the middle flower you would have a picture I'd like more.
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