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    Untitled

          2

    Great idea. Not overworked, the tones are soft. Very well post-processed, it works for me. In fact I have to leave know looking at all those curvy lines, I'm getting dizy ;)

     

    regards,

     

    martin

    Untitled

          5

    Very nice soft directed light. Good lightning on the background. Good high key. 

     

    But what I find the more original is the awkward position of her feet The way the arms, hands and fingers are placed, is not that conventional but it look (kind of weird) natural !!!

    In sum, a weird pose (in between plastic-fake-but-natural) that gives the originality to your photo. I look a great moment at the way she was modeling. So it works.

    Great photo, 

     

    regards, 

     

    martin

     

  1. This is a composite picture of a serie of 3 photos taken at night

    between 35 and 50 sec. The light in the sky is coming from the city at

    far. I have place my self so it was just over the old barn.

     

    tx for looking at my web site for my latest work.

    Untitled

          2

    You should put this one to ratings. I would put a 7, I find it very original. Great from you to have saw that. I'm curious: how big was this piece of ice and how far were you from it?

     

    regards,

     

    martin

     

    glace_0250_web12

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    This photo was taken a few days before christmas. Here the wind had

    sculpted some blaze arround a pine needle.

     

    The needle on the back left, was added with PS. I use clonage, free

    transform, blur and played with the % of the layer to get a look-a-like

    depth and color. I tought that the picture was not balance. It was more

    easy to add then remove.

     

    Feel free to visit my personnal web site. I have been absent from pn for a

    few years now.

     

    Thanks for your help,

     

    martin

    Old Barn

          2

    An old photo that I have to put to the photo critique to hope to gain

    some place and put my new work. Been away from photo.net for 3 or

    4 years. Hi, to my old critiques glad to see your work again.

    Street portrait

          10

    What a character. Great composition. Her hands are perfectly placed, good impact. I dont know if you directed your model, but it look very casual.

     

    The black and white range is also very good. At first, I tought that the picture could have been a little bit more sharper in her face area, but I dont think, after looking at it, that it affect the quality of the photo. Whit the flare in the glasses, it keep some distance from the viewer. After all, she doesnt look like if she wants to share alot.

     

    Very interesting photo,

     

    Cheers,

     

    martin 

    Beneath The Sky

          5

    Is this a "friendly-giant" ;)

     

    Many interesting lines. The Small road and large women get's the perspectives a little bit mix-up and that is eye-catching. The tree, skirt, ballons and the far castle-a-like structure at the back keep me in the photo. Many things to explore. 

     

    The fog on the ground also gives an other line to the opposite direction of the road.

     

    Maybe A shorter umbrella would have work better though. It is mixing a little bit in the tree.

     

    Very very nice work,

     

    Hats off, 

     

    martin

     

    Rufous Hummingbird

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    Great details. The sharpening is just fine (not over done). The close up of the throat is very interesting. The front shot let us see that the birds bec is quite high.

    God job, great shot. I like it :)

    Untitled

          13

    Great mood. Great foggy atmosphere. I dont know if it's me but I think you can straigten a little bit the horizon line. It would remove a little vit of white in the foreground, but I am not distract with the left-right crop. It is very fine.

     

    Very good job. 

     

    cheers,

     

    martin

    L O V E R S

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    This is a tremendous composition. The green leaf brings the eye to a strong point witch is also has some conversion lines in the background. The background is perfect.

     

    The only thing, is between the eyes of the insects. It is a little bit over-exposed. Maybe you could get some details by doing a multi raw. 

     

    Over all, an extremely eye catching shoot.

     

    congrats.

    Play marbles

          23

    Very well balanced 1- with your flash that fill in with this close up and 2- the exposure for the background is perect. 

    Very difficult to get no over-exposure in front great. 

    The proportions are great to. And very original shot.

     

    Regards, 

     

    martin

    Untitled

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    This pictuce is getting memorable cause I am in a bull fight with

     

    3 little one of that kind. It will sure smell bad this fall if I dont do

    nothing soon, Does any one knows when it start to shot there stuff. I

    mean 1 month 6 weeks or 10 weeks ???

     

    They are at 8 to 12 weeks, the mother dont look to be arround !!

    My books say they can be 2 to 10 (usualy 4 or 6) Yieekss!!

    Diane

          1

    If you think this sucks find. Tell me why. But if you want to buy it, great

    let me know to ... ;)

     

    Maybe the lady on the photo will want it printed large. Or if you dont

    think so: tell me why. ;) for now the print is just a 4x6 thinking of a

    5x7 to ???????

     

    tx for comments

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